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Chapter 8: Wonderfully Useful Battle Training

Echoes of a Past Eternity

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Elena knew something was wrong before anyone spoke.

That was one of her more inconvenient talents.

Deckard had barely stepped through the side gate when her eyes moved from him, to Garron, to Estellise, then back to Garron with the precise calm of someone deciding which person deserved to be questioned first.Full novel: Echoes of a Past Eternity — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

The answer was obvious.

Garron looked guilty.

Deckard looked too quiet.

Estellise looked like Estellise, which somehow made the whole thing worse.

Elena stood in the open doorway with a folded cloth in one hand and flour dusting one sleeve.

The yard behind the house was empty except for the chopping block, a stack of old practice staves Garron had not touched in months, and a laundry line moving gently in the morning breeze.

“You found them,” Elena said.

Garron rubbed the back of his neck.

“Aye.”

“At the lake?”

Deckard stared.

“You knew?”

Elena’s eyes did not leave Garron.

“Of course I knew.

The question was whether your father remembered how obvious he becomes when he is hiding worry.”

Garron lowered his hand.

“That’s unfair.”

“It is accurate.”

Estellise glanced at Deckard.

Deckard whispered, “That is where you get it.”

She whispered back, “I was thinking the same.”

Elena looked at them.

Both stopped whispering.

Garron cleared his throat.

“We need to talk.”

“No,” Elena said.

“You need to explain.”

“Fair.”

“Inside.”

Garron glanced at Estellise.

Elena noticed.

“No.

If she is part of this, she can stand where I can see her.”

Estellise straightened slightly.

Deckard had the uncomfortable sense that everyone in the yard had just become either a witness or an accused party, and he was somehow both.

Garron took one breath.

Then another.

“I followed Deckard this morning.”

“Because he has been sneaking out.”

“Because he has been training.”

Elena’s face hardened.

“With her.”

“Yes.”

“Since when?”

“A few days after the Obscura.”

Deckard tried to speak.

“Mother, I—”

“No.”

He closed his mouth.

Garron continued before silence made things worse.

“She has been teaching him movement.

Balance.

Footwork.

How not to throw himself forward and die before a fight begins.”

“How comforting.”

“It is, actually.”

Elena’s eyes flashed.

Garron did not retreat.

That was when Deckard became truly worried.

“He ran toward an Obscura with a pitchfork,” Garron said.

“He found the old lake.

He found someone willing to teach him.

He is going to keep moving toward danger whether we name it or not.”

“He is sixteen.”

“Aye.”

“He is our son.”

“Aye.”

“And your answer is to put a sword back in his hand?”

“My answer is to stop pretending empty hands make him safe.”

The yard went still.

Deckard looked down.

Elena’s grip tightened around the cloth.

For a moment, her anger cracked enough for fear to show through.

“Do you hear yourself?” she asked.

“We spent years keeping him away from this.”

“I know.”

“Years, Garron.”

“I know.”

“And now because he was foolish once—”

“Not once.”

Deckard winced.

Garron looked at him, then back at Elena.

“He will be foolish again.

The boy has many talents.

Stopping when told is not among them.”

“Thank you,” Deckard muttered.

“Not praise,” Garron said.

Elena stepped down from the doorway.

“Training makes danger familiar.

Familiar danger becomes easier to chase.”

“So does ignorance, apparently.”

That landed badly.

Deckard saw it.

Garron saw it too.

Elena’s voice dropped.

“Do not make this sound simple.”

“I am not.”

“You are.”

“I am making it sound necessary.”

“It is not.”

A knock came from the front of the house.

No one moved.

Then a man’s voice spoke from beyond the corner wall.

“It is.”

Estellise turned first.

Her posture changed so quickly that Deckard noticed before he understood.

Not fear.

Not surprise.

Recognition sharpened into discipline.

Her master stepped into view.

He wore a dark traveling coat despite the mild morning, his hair tied neatly behind him, his expression calm enough to make the argument around him feel louder by contrast.

He carried no visible weapon.

That made Deckard assume he had several.

Estellise lowered her head slightly.

“Master.”

Elena’s eyes narrowed.

“Richter.”

“Elena.”

“This is not your house.”

“No,” Richter said.

“But my apprentice has become part of this matter.”

“Your apprentice should not be.”

“That was my first conclusion.”

Elena paused.

Garron looked at him.

Deckard looked at Estellise.

Estellise looked at no one.

Richter stepped fully into the yard without asking permission, which somehow made it feel as if he had asked and received it from the air itself.

“I came intending to stop her.”

Estellise looked up.

Only slightly.

Richter continued, “She has no obligation to correct a village boy’s balance.

No duty to spend mornings teaching him how not to place his feet where an enemy would prefer them.

No reason to make his recklessness more durable.”

Deckard frowned.

“Durable?”

“Quiet,” three adults said.

He became quiet.

Elena folded her arms.

“Then we agree.”

“No,” Richter said.

Her expression sharpened.

“I watched them.”

“Of course you did.”

“Yes.”

“That was not approval.”

“It was accuracy.”

Deckard glanced at Estellise.

She gave the smallest shake of her head, as if warning him not to enter the path of whatever was about to happen.

Wise.

“Teaching him is useful for her,” Richter said.

Elena gave a short, humorless laugh.

“For her.”

“Yes.”

“How fortunate.”

“Very.”

The answer was so blunt that even Garron blinked.

Richter looked at Estellise.

“She has repeated the same foundations for years.

Balance.

Distance.

Breath.

Timing.

Observation.

Control.

She knows them well enough to perform them without thought.”

“That is the point of training,” Garron said.

“Part of it,” Richter said.

“But teaching requires another skill.

She must slow down.

Explain.

Watch mistakes form before they become movements.

She must understand what she does well enough to break it into pieces.”

Estellise’s gaze lowered.

Richter’s voice softened by no measurable amount, and yet somehow did.

“That is growth.”

Elena said nothing.

Richter turned his attention to Deckard.

“As for him, he is reckless.”

Deckard sighed.

“That word is becoming crowded.”

“Clumsy.”

“That one too.”

“Impatient.”

“Less crowded.

Still unpleasant.”

“But not dull,” Richter said.

Deckard stopped.

That was almost praise.

Possibly.

Richter continued, “He learns when pain, embarrassment, or stubbornness forces him to listen.

Those are inefficient teachers.

Still, they seem available.”

Garron made a sound suspiciously close to agreement.

Elena looked between them.

“You are all discussing this as if he is a dull blade on a table.”

“He is not dull,” Estellise said.

Everyone looked at her.

She seemed to realize she had spoken.

Then she added, “Just badly balanced.”

Deckard closed his eyes.

“Thank you.”

“That was not praise.”

“I gathered.”

Elena’s anger faltered despite herself.

Only for a heartbeat.

Richter used it.

“Those two will continue,” he said.

Elena’s face went cold again.

“No.”

“Yes.”

“Against my wishes?”

“Against yours.

Against Garron’s, if he tries to forbid it.

Against mine, if I command her to stop.”

Estellise looked at him sharply.

Richter did not look back.

“Interest is difficult to bury once it becomes action.

Deckard will continue seeking strength because he has learned courage alone is insufficient.

Estellise will continue correcting him because she finds it…” He paused, as if the word itself still offended his understanding of the world.

“Fun.”

Deckard glanced at her.

Estellise looked away.

Elena noticed that too.

“So we let them?”

“No,” Richter said.

“We place walls around what they are already doing.”

Garron nodded slowly.

“Where we can see.”

“Where correction is controlled.”

“Where mistakes bruise instead of kill.”

“Preferably.”

Elena looked at Garron.

“You are enjoying agreeing with him far too much.”

“I am not enjoying any of this.”

“Your face says otherwise.”

“My face is unreliable.”

Deckard looked up.

“That defense never works.”

“No one asked you,” Garron said.

Richter’s gaze shifted toward the repaired ward line beyond the house, though it was not visible from the yard.

“And there is another matter.”

Elena already knew she would dislike it.

“What?”

“The Obscura reached your market.”

No one answered.

“Not the outer path.

Not some forgotten ruin beyond the stones.

The market.

Children were there.

Merchants.

Bakers.

People who believed the horn belonged to old stories.”

Elena’s expression tightened.

Richter’s voice remained even.

“After that, pretending Luminaris has enough defenders is arrogance.”

The words settled heavily.

Garron did not look pleased to hear them.

Elena looked as if she hated that she could not dismiss them.

Richter continued, “A few more people who can stand, move, and survive long enough to defend the village would be useful.”

“Deckard is not a defender.”

“Not yet.”

“Do not say that as if it is decided.”

“It is not decided,” Richter said.

“It is beginning.”

The yard fell quiet.

A bird called from the roof beam.

The laundry line shifted in the breeze.

Elena looked at Deckard.

Deckard tried not to look hopeful.

He failed.

Her face softened.

That was worse than anger.

“You will get hurt,” she said.

“I already did.”

“I know.”

Her voice nearly broke on the second word.

Deckard looked down again.

“I know,” he said more quietly.

Elena closed her eyes.

When she opened them, she looked first at Garron.

Then Richter.

Then Estellise.

Finally, Deckard.

“Terms.”

Garron exhaled.

Deckard straightened.

Elena lifted one finger.

“No secret training.”

“Agreed,” Garron said.

“No lake without telling us first.”

Deckard hesitated.

Elena’s eyes narrowed.

“Agreed,” he said quickly.

“No blades unless Garron is present.”

Richter said, “Reasonable.”

Estellise nodded.

“No training past exhaustion.”

Garron looked as if he might object.

Elena pointed at him.

“Do not.”

He wisely did not.

“No hiding injuries from me.

Scrapes, bruises, twisted ankles, headaches, anything.

If I find out you hid something, training stops.”

Deckard swallowed.

“Agreed.”

“And if I say it stops, it stops.”

That one lingered.

Garron met her eyes.

“Aye.”

Richter inclined his head.

“Accepted.”

Estellise said, “Accepted.”

Deckard nodded.

Elena stared at him until he realized nodding was insufficient.

“Accepted.”

“Good.”

She stepped aside from the doorway.

“Then begin.”

Deckard blinked.

“Now?”

Elena smiled.

It was not comforting.

“If this is necessary, I would like to see exactly what kind of necessary foolishness has taken over my yard.”

Garron picked up one of the old wooden practice swords from the rack near the wall and tossed it toward Deckard.

Deckard caught it.

Badly.

But he caught it.

For one glorious instant, he held a sword again.

Then Garron said, “Put it down.”

Deckard stared.

“What?”

“Put it down.”

“But you just gave it to me.”

“And you held it wrong.

Down.”

Deckard lowered the wooden sword with visible grief.

Estellise watched with interest.

Richter stood near the wall, arms folded.

Elena remained in the doorway.

The audience did not help.

Garron stepped into the center of the yard.

“Feet.”

Deckard looked betrayed.

“No.”

“Yes.”

“Not again.”

“Always again,” Estellise said.

Garron pointed at her without looking away from Deckard.

“Listen to the girl.”

“The girl throws pebbles into trees.”

“Then move before she needs to.”

Richter spoke from the wall.

“His left heel turns out when he becomes defensive.”

Deckard turned toward him.

“You too?”

“I observed.”

“Does no one in this village announce themselves?”

“No,” Estellise said.

“That explains too much.”

Garron tapped the ground with his boot.

“Stance.

Now.”

Deckard set his feet.

Garron walked around him once.

Estellise walked around him the other way.

Deckard stood between them and looked increasingly like a fence post under inspection.

“Too narrow,” Garron said.

“Too tense,” Estellise said.

“Shoulders high.”

“Weight forward.”

“Jaw clenched.”

“That affects my feet?”

“It affects everything,” Richter said.

Deckard looked toward Elena.

“Mother.”

She lifted both hands.

“I agreed to this.

I did not promise mercy.”

Garron adjusted Deckard’s stance with one boot against his ankle and two fingers at his shoulder.

“This is where you start.”

“It feels awkward.”

“Good.”

“Awkward is good?”

“Awkward means you are not doing the old wrong thing.”

Estellise tilted her head.

“That is useful.”

Garron looked pleased.

Deckard looked doomed.

For the next quarter hour, he did not swing the sword once.

He stood.

Shifted.

Stepped.

Returned.

Shifted again.

Garron corrected him with gruff patience.

Estellise corrected him with surgical cruelty.

Richter corrected him only twice, which somehow made both corrections feel fatal.

Elena watched from the doorway, arms folded, saying nothing.

At last, Garron allowed him to pick up the wooden sword.

Deckard’s hope returned.

Briefly.

Garron tapped his knee with a practice staff.

Deckard stumbled.

“Dead.”

“I was holding the sword.”

“Your legs were not.”

Estellise nodded.

“Decoration.”

“Do not start,” Deckard said.

Garron tapped his shoulder.

“Dead.”

Deckard turned.

Estellise pointed at his feet.

“Also dead.”

“Can I be dead once at a time?”

“No,” Garron said.

“No,” Estellise said.

Richter said nothing.

That felt like agreement.

By the time the sun rose higher over the roof, Deckard’s tunic clung to his back and his legs shook from work that looked insultingly simple.

He had swung the practice sword exactly six times.

Two had been stopped before finishing.

One had earned a grunt from Garron that might have been approval or indigestion.

Still, he was standing better.

He could feel it.

That was the worst part.

The punishment was working.

Garron rested the staff against his shoulder.

“Again tomorrow.”

Deckard leaned on the wooden sword.

“Tomorrow?”

“Every morning.”

Estellise looked at him.

“It will be fun.”

He stared at her.

“I no longer trust that word.”

Elena’s mouth twitched from the doorway.

Richter turned to leave.

Then Estellise said, “One more.”

Deckard went still.

“No.”

“Reaction test.”

“No.”

“You said he reacts quickly when startled,” Garron said.

Deckard slowly turned toward his father.

“That was not an invitation.”

“It was an observation,” Garron said.

“I am beginning to hate observations.”

Estellise crouched and picked up a small pebble from the edge of the yard.

Elena’s eyes narrowed.

“Estellise.”

“I will miss.”

“That is not as comforting as you think.”

“By enough.”

“Still not comforting.”

Deckard raised the wooden sword.

“Wait.

Are we agreeing to throw rocks at me in front of my mother now?”

“Pebble,” Estellise said.

“Weaponized pebble.”

“Training pebble.”

“There is no such thing.”

“There is now,” Garron said.

Deckard stared at him.

“You have changed.”

“I have adapted.”

“That is worse.”

Estellise lifted the pebble between two fingers.

“Dodge.”

She flicked it.

Deckard saw it leave her hand.

That was all.

The pebble crossed the yard faster than something that small had any right to move.

Not as hard as the ones at the lake.

Not enough to lodge in wood.

Enough to sting.

Enough to teach.

Deckard tried to move.

His legs failed him.

Too tired.

Too late.

The pebble reached his shoulder.

Then it curved.

Only a finger’s width.

Barely enough.

It bent around him as if the air beside his body had turned aside and taken the stone with it.

The pebble struck the dirt behind him.

No one spoke.

Deckard blinked.

Then looked at Estellise.

“I dodged?”

“No,” she said.

The answer came too quickly.

Garron’s hand tightened around the staff.

Elena had gone very still in the doorway.

Richter turned back from the gate.

His eyes were fixed not on Deckard’s face, but on the empty air where the pebble had changed course.

Deckard looked between them.

“What?”

The laundry line moved behind him.

Only once.

There was no wind in the yard.

Richter’s expression sharpened.

Garron said nothing.

Elena whispered, “No.”

That single word frightened Deckard more than any shout would have.

The old practice sword in his hand gave a faint wooden creak.

A thin pale line ran along its edge.

Then vanished.

Deckard looked down.

“What was that?”

No one answered.

For the first time that morning, no one corrected him.

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