hello. I am thinking of rewriting my body swap novel (again). i am thinking about asking for your feedback. If this goes on, i will release all my backlog somewhere next week or the week after (in patreon). For SH and NovelBin, it will either continue to post once or twice a week depending on my decision.
The reason for rewrite is this
First of the issue, I think the dungeon diving had become a liability. At first, i want to justify MC to have a harem, connecting his ability financially. but it didn't work out. The MC now looked like he was doing his girls for missions and not love. What do you guys think? Should I just delete all dungeon and fantasy creature in the rewrite? making pure romance?
Second is MC's attitude and power scaling. do you think he was a bit underpowered, coward, or had become very unlikeable with his approach to his girls?
third. What about romance? Is the romance unlikeable? like too much BDSM? or beating around the bsuh with the scamming thing?
Thank you for your feedback. Once I knew what direction this novel should go, I will let you know.
Thank you for the support everyone!