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I Can See Your Flaws. Now Let Me Turn You Into a Monster

Chapter 10 / 34

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Chapter 9: The Trial of Pairs+Author’s Note

I Can See Your Flaws. Now Let Me Turn You Into a Monster

The morning sun cast long shadows across the neglected courtyard as Instructor Gage stood motionless at its center, his tailored suit pristine and his expression absolutely calm.

The nineteen commoner students of Class F stood arranged in a loose semicircle, their faces flushed from the pre-dawn training they had already endured.

After the assassination attempt and Gage's brutal message to the council, a perceptible shift had occurred in the academy.

The noble students no longer ventured into the Class F training grounds.

The faculty kept their distance.

Class F had become an island unto itself, a place where the normal rules of Pristina Academy simply did not apply.

"Today marks the beginning of your final preparation phase," Gage announced, his low voice cutting through the expectant silence.

"In twenty-nine days, the midterm festival will commence."

"At that festival, you will face opponents who have spent their entire lives being told they are superior to you."

"They will cast spells that cost more than your families earn in a year."

"They will wear armor blessed by ancient mages."

"They will march into the arena absolutely certain of their victory."

Gage paused, his piercing eyes sweeping across the assembled teenagers.

"Today, you will demonstrate your readiness."

"I am implementing the Trial of Pairs."

"You will split into ten groups of two, and each pair will face me in single combat for exactly sixty seconds."

"Your objective is not to defeat me, that is impossible."

"Your objective is to survive without losing consciousness."

"If even a single member of your pair remains conscious at the end of sixty seconds, your pair passes."

The students exchanged nervous glances.

Facing Gage in a controlled one on one had been terrifying enough.

Now they would have to do it in pairs, against an instructor who had casually obliterated five S-rank assassins without standing up.

"Let us begin," Gage said flatly.

"Pair One: step forward."

A tall, lean boy with jet black hair and sharp, calculating eyes walked toward the center of the yard.

His name was Kael, and his movements carried a predatory grace that suggested hidden physicality beneath his commoner uniform.

Beside him came a smaller, more compact girl with deep brown skin and intricate braided hair that was tied back in a warrior's knot.

Her name was Zara, and her muscular forearms bore the calluses of someone who had worked with her hands her entire life.

Kael and Zara approached the center, their breathing steady despite the obvious fear in their eyes.

Gage's eyes narrowed, and his system interface activated.

Target: Kael

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: D / A

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / S

Reflexes: D / S

Tactical Awareness: C / A

Target: Zara

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: C / A

Endurance: D / S

Speed: D / B

Reflexes: C / A

Physical Fortitude: C / A

Interesting, Gage noted silently.

Kael possessed exceptional speed potential despite his current C tier conditioning, his reflex ceiling was locked at S rank, suggesting an affinity for rapid decision-making.

Zara, meanwhile, was built entirely differently.

Her strength and physical fortitude were her anchors, her body constructed to absorb punishment and endure.

They were complementary opposites, which meant their pairing had significant tactical potential.

"Begin," Gage commanded.

The moment the word left his mouth, both teenagers exploded forward simultaneously.

Kael moved in a sharp, angular pattern, trying to circle around Gage's left side while Zara drove straight forward with a powerful, low aimed shoulder charge.

Gage took a single, deliberate step backward.

Zara's shoulder crashed into empty air, her momentum carrying her forward uncontrollably.

Kael attempted to exploit the momentary opening by launching a high kick aimed at Gage's head, but the instructor simply tilted his body backward by a fraction of an inch, allowing the heel to whisper past.

Without breaking his composure, Gage extended his right leg in a sweeping motion, catching Zara's ankles and sending her tumbling face first into the dirt.

Kael recovered instantly, launching into a series of rapid, coordinated strikes: left jab, right cross, spin kick, attempting to overwhelm through sheer speed.

But Gage was like dancing with stone.

Every strike either missed by a margin so precise it seemed supernatural, or connected with the flat of his palm in ways that drained energy without causing injury.

Thirty seconds elapsed.

Both teenagers were already breathing heavily, their muscles burning from the exertion of trying to land even a single clean blow.

Forty five seconds.

Zara attempted a desperation grapple, lunging low and trying to lock Gage's legs, but he simply sidestepped and tapped the back of her neck, a precise, non lethal strike that caused her to collapse onto the courtyard floor.

Kael, seeing his partner fall, let out a wild roar and launched into one final, explosive combination of strikes.

For a brief microsecond, one of his strikes, a perfectly executed roundhouse kick, actually connected with Gage's ribs.

The impact registered.

The connection was real.

Kael's eyes widened in absolute shock, a brief flicker of hope igniting in his gaze.

But Gage simply looked down at the boy with an expression of complete, icy indifference.

"Sixty seconds," Gage announced calmly.

The timer had expired.

Kael, despite his exhaustion, remained conscious.

He stood on trembling legs, his chest heaving, his knuckles bleeding from the friction of his repeated strikes.

He had survived.

The seventeen other students watched in stunned silence.

Kael had actually managed to land a strike on Gage.

It was impossible, yet it had happened.

A barely perceptible nod crossed Gage's expression, a silent acknowledgment of Kael's willingness to push beyond his fear.

"Pair One passes," Gage said flatly.

"Pair Two: step forward."

A burly boy with a scarred face and massive shoulders stepped into the arena.

His name was Torren, and his physical conditioning was immediately apparent, he was the strongest of Class F in terms of raw muscle mass.

Beside him came a girl with pale, almost translucent skin and long silver hair that seemed to catch the light in unusual ways.

Her name was Lyssa, and her eyes held an intensity that suggested hidden depths far beyond her delicate appearance.

Gage's system activated.

Target: Torren

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: B / SS

Endurance: B / SS

Speed: E / D

Reflexes: E / C

Physical Resilience: B / S

Target: Lyssa

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: SS

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: D / S

Endurance: C / SS

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Mana Sensitivity: C / EX

Unique Talent: Spatial Distortion (Locked)

Gage's eyes lingered on Lyssa for a fraction longer than the others.

A unique talent that was locked?

Mana sensitivity capped at EX tier?

This commoner girl possessed something far more anomalous than the others, something that suggested her potential was fundamentally different from standard human conditioning.

"Begin," Gage commanded.

Torren charged forward like a raging beast, his massive frame moving with surprising agility as he attempted a powerful tackle.

Lyssa moved in the opposite direction, her slender body weaving through the air with an almost unnatural fluidity.

She wasn't trying to fight Gage directly, she was positioning herself, creating space, analyzing.

When Gage shifted his weight to counter Torren's charge, Lyssa suddenly moved.

She didn't attack.

Instead, she simply existed in a specific location at a specific moment, and the air around her seemed to shimmer.

For a single, brief microsecond, Gage felt something unusual.

A distortion in space that wasn't mana, wasn't magic in the traditional sense, but something far more primal and elemental.

It was gone instantly, but it had been there.

"Interesting," Gage murmured silently, his system already noting the anomaly.

Torren, meanwhile, was getting systematically dismantled.

Gage was using the massive boy as a counterweight, redirecting his own momentum against him, sending the giant crashing into the dirt repeatedly.

Fifty seconds elapsed.

Lyssa attempted another spatial shimmer, but this time Gage was ready.

He simply stepped sideways into the distortion's epicenter, his presence alone crushing whatever effect she was attempting to manifest.

She stumbled backward, her elegant facade cracking as genuine fear crossed her features for the first time.

Sixty seconds.

Torren was on his back, completely drained but still conscious.

Lyssa was standing, barely, her breathing ragged and her form shaking.

"Pair Two passes," Gage announced.

But as the pair retreated from the arena, his gaze lingered on Lyssa.

Whatever that spatial distortion was, it needed to be studied further.

Pair Three: Silas and Mina

Silas, the iron boned tank, paired with Mina, the kinetic vision prodigy.

Silas charged low while Mina circled high, attempting to use superior sight and speed to exploit openings.

For the first thirty seconds, they actually coordinated well, Mina directing Silas toward openings, Silas providing the heavy impact.

But Gage simply refused to allow them to maintain their rhythm.

He would target Mina's peripheral vision with rapid, feinted movements, destabilizing her tracking ability.

When she became disoriented, he would then focus entirely on Silas, using the boy's own momentum against him.

By forty five seconds, both were gasping for air.

Yet at sixty seconds, both remained conscious.

"Pair Three passes."

Pair Four: Jared and Finn

Jared was one of the first students Gage had met, the one with exceptional bone density.

Finn was newer to the narrative, a quick witted boy with sharp reflexes but minimal physical strength.

Together, they attempted a pincer movement, but Gage simply stood at the center and allowed them to circle, never committing to either until the final seconds.

When the sixty second mark arrived, both had been knocked down at least three times each.

Yet both were still breathing, still conscious.

"Pair Four passes."

Pair Five: Crimson and Raven

The moment Crimson stepped forward, the entire courtyard's atmosphere shifted.

The other students immediately sensed it, the awakened boy's baseline conditioning was different from theirs.

His Awakened state had left residual changes in his physiology that were permanent.

Beside him came Raven, a dark haired girl with cold, calculating eyes and a body type that suggested she had trained in assassination or stealth for most of her life.

Gage's system activated.

Target: Crimson

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Current Status: Awakened (Stage 1 Locked)

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: D / B

Endurance: C / A

Speed: B / SSR

Reflexes: C / SSR

Hidden Talent: Explosive Acceleration

Target: Raven

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: D / B

Endurance: D / A

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Hidden Talent: Killing Intent Suppression

Crimson's speed potential had evolved since his breakthrough in the arena.

The SSR tier ceiling suggested he was approaching mythological levels of velocity.

Raven, meanwhile, possessed something far more subtle, the ability to suppress her hostile presence, making her effectively invisible on an instinctual level.

"Begin," Gage commanded.

Crimson exploded forward with B rank speed, his movements a blur that even Mina's kinetic vision would struggle to track.

But Gage was expecting it.

He sidestepped with inhuman precision, his counter strike aimed at Crimson's ribs.

The red haired boy twisted mid motion, his SSR tier reflex ceiling allowing him to react faster than any normal human should be capable of.

The strike missed by a hair's breadth.

Meanwhile, Raven had moved into position.

Her killing intent suppression allowed her to exist in Gage's peripheral vision almost as if she weren't there at all.

She attempted a strike aimed at a vital nerve cluster on his shoulder, but Gage's system had already mapped her position.

He rotated his body, his elbow connecting with Raven's sternum in a movement that looked almost casual.

The force sent her flying backward, crashing into the courtyard wall.

Crimson, seeing his partner attacked, unleashed everything.

His speed ramped up toward the limits of his current B rank ceiling, his movements becoming a choreography of explosive acceleration and desperate counterattacks.

For thirty seconds, the battle was a whirlwind of motion and violence.

But Crimson was still fundamentally human, still bound by the laws of physics and human endurance.

His breathing grew ragged.

His movements began to slow.

Forty five seconds.

Raven had managed to drag herself back to standing, blood dripping from her lip, but she was still conscious.

Crimson was moving more slowly now, his explosiveness fading as his muscles began to hit their conditioning limits.

Sixty seconds.

Crimson dropped to one knee, completely exhausted, his chest heaving violently.

But his eyes were still open.

Raven was leaning against the wall, barely conscious, but her gaze remained locked onto Gage with an expression of pure, defiant determination.

"Pair Five passes," Gage announced.

But there was something different in his tone, a subtle acknowledgment that this pair had pushed him closer to his limit than any of the others.

Pair Six: Ash and Nova

A quiet boy named Ash and a girl with wild orange curly hair named Nova.

Ash was a ghost in the classroom, rarely speaking, his presence almost forgettable.

Yet his potential tier was rated A, suggesting hidden depths.

Nova, by contrast, was loud, energetic, and seemed to approach the trial with absolute fearlessness.

Gage's system revealed that Ash possessed exceptional evasion instincts, while Nova had an unusual affinity for momentum manipulation, her body seemed to understand kinetic energy in ways that defied normal physics.

They were a comedy duo turned combat pair, and their synchronization was chaotic but effective.

Nova would charge forward with wild, unpredictable strikes that forced Gage to react rather than act.

Ash would slip through the gaps, attempting strikes from angles that seemed impossible.

Neither landed a hit, but both managed to survive the full sixty seconds through sheer creativity and coordination.

"Pair Six passes," Gage said, and there was a definite note of mild amusement in his voice.

Pair Seven: Kren and Mara

Silas's rival Kren, a bitter, aggressive boy, and Mara, a calm, meditative girl with surprising strength.

They fought like water and stone, Kren all aggression and rage, Mara all patience and perfect positioning.

Neither could land a hit against Gage, but their complementary natures meant they never interfered with each other.

"Pair Seven passes."

Pair Eight: Vex and Thorn

A tall, lanky boy named Vex and a muscular girl named Thorn.

Vex was a contortionist, his body able to move in ways that seemed to violate normal skeletal constraints.

Thorn was a grappler, her strength focused on leverage and holds rather than striking power.

Together, they attempted to trap Gage in a coordinated lock, but he simply exerted enough pressure to make both of them lose consciousness simultaneously.

Neither remained standing at sixty seconds.

"Pair Eight fails."

A heavy silence fell across the courtyard.

The first failure.

Pair Nine: Ketch and Iris

A scarred boy named Ketch and a soft spoken girl named Iris.

Ketch had survived the academy's brutality through pure stubborn willpower.

Iris was a healer's apprentice, her knowledge of anatomy giving her insights into pressure points and vital weaknesses.

They fought with intelligence rather than raw power, but Gage was a force of nature that could not be outsmarted by mere commoners.

Neither remained conscious.

"Pair Nine fails."

Pair Ten: Dorian and Sage

The final pair, a reserved boy named Dorian and a fierce girl named Sage.

Dorian was quiet, introspective, his potential tier rated S despite his unassuming demeanor.

Sage was a ball of aggressive energy, her competitive spirit burning hot enough to be visible in her eyes.

When Gage activated his system, he saw something unusual in Dorian's profile.

Target: Dorian

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Current Physical Attributes:

Strength: D / A

Endurance: D / S

Speed: C / A

Reflexes: D / S

Hidden Talent: Adaptive Evolution (Locked)

Adaptive Evolution.

Another locked talent, similar to Lyssa's spatial distortion.

This commoner boy could adapt to stimuli in real time, his body gradually becoming immune to repeated forms of damage or pressure.

Dorian and Sage moved toward the center.

Sage immediately launched into a berserker assault, her strikes coming rapid and powerful.

Gage deflected them with clinical precision.

But Dorian, standing behind Sage, was watching.

Every deflection, every parry, every subtle shift in Gage's positioning, Dorian was learning.

His adaptive evolution talent was locked, but even in its dormant state, his mind was cataloging patterns, building a mental library of Gage's movements.

Thirty seconds in, Sage was already visibly exhausted, her aggressive assault grinding against Gage's immovable defense.

Forty five seconds, and Gage actually noticed that Dorian's anticipation was improving.

The boy was predicting movements that Gage hadn't even committed to yet.

Sixty seconds.

Sage collapsed, completely drained.

Dorian remained standing, his eyes sharp and focused, his breathing controlled.

He had survived not through strength or speed, but through pure mental adaptation.

"Pair Ten passes," Gage announced.

And for the first time, there was genuine interest in his voice.

The trials concluded.

Eight pairs passed.

Two pairs failed.

Gage stood motionless in the center of the courtyard as the twenty students slowly dragged themselves to standing positions, their bodies screaming in agony, their clothes soaked in sweat and blood.

"You now understand what awaits you at the festival," Gage said, his low voice carrying absolute weight.

"The opponents you will face there are not stronger than me."

"But they are still formidable, and they will exploit every weakness they perceive in your forms."

He reached into his suit pocket and pulled out a stack of twenty individual training documents.

"Each of you has been assigned a customized regime for the remaining twenty eight days."

"The pairs that failed will undergo additional conditioning sessions every evening."

"The pairs that passed will focus on tactical refinement and combat synchronization."

He walked through the rows of exhausted students, dropping a single document onto each one's chest.

"Crimson," Gage called out specifically.

The red haired boy looked up, his eyes still carrying that predatory focus.

"Your regime is triple intensity from this point forward."

"By the time the festival arrives, you will stand as the apex of Class F."

"Do not disappoint me."

Crimson nodded silently, clutching the thick envelope to his chest.

Gage's piercing gaze swept across the remaining nineteen teenagers.

"You now have twenty eight days to become the monsters that will dismantle the academy's hierarchy."

"The evaluation has entered its final phase."

"Prove to this institution that their assessment of your worth was spectacularly, catastrophically wrong."

As the sun reached its zenith over the neglected courtyard of Class F, the twenty commoner students stood surrounded by their training documents and their bloody sweat, their minds alight with a singular, unified purpose.

In twenty eight days, they would enter the midterm festival arena.

And they would transform into precisely what Instructor Gage had promised from the very beginning.

Monsters.

Author's Note:

Here are the complete stat panels for all twenty Class F students:

Target: Kael

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: D / A

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / S

Reflexes: D / S

Tactical Awareness: C / A

Target: Zara

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: C / A

Endurance: D / S

Speed: D / B

Reflexes: C / A

Physical Fortitude: C / A

Target: Torren

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Strength: B / SS

Endurance: B / SS

Speed: E / D

Reflexes: E / C

Physical Resilience: B / S

Target: Lyssa

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: SS

Strength: D / S

Endurance: C / SS

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Mana Sensitivity: C / EX

Unique Talent: Spatial Distortion (Locked)

Target: Silas

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: B / A

Endurance: B / A

Speed: D / D

Reflexes: C / B

Unique Talent: Iron Bone Density (Active)

Target: Mina

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: D / C

Endurance: C / B

Speed: B / B

Reflexes: B / S

Unique Talent: Peripheral Kinetic Vision (Active)

Target: Jared

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: B / A

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / B

Reflexes: D / B

Unique Talent: Iron Bone Density (Active)

Target: Finn

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: B

Strength: D / D

Endurance: D / C

Speed: B / B

Reflexes: B / A

Unique Talent: Tactical Prediction (Active)

Target: Crimson

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Current Status: Awakened (Stage 1 Locked)

Strength: D / B

Endurance: C / A

Speed: B / SSR

Reflexes: C / SSR

Hidden Talent: Explosive Acceleration (Active)

Target: Raven

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: D / B

Endurance: D / A

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Hidden Talent: Killing Intent Suppression (Active)

Target: Ash

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: D / C

Endurance: D / B

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Hidden Talent: Evasion Instinct (Active)

Target: Nova

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: B

Strength: C / B

Endurance: B / B

Speed: C / A

Reflexes: C / A

Hidden Talent: Momentum Manipulation (Active)

Target: Kren

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: B / B

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / B

Reflexes: D / B

Hidden Talent: Aggressive Instinct (Active)

Target: Mara

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: D / B

Endurance: C / A

Speed: D / C

Reflexes: B / A

Hidden Talent: Perfect Positioning (Active)

Target: Vex

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: B

Strength: D / D

Endurance: D / C

Speed: B / A

Reflexes: B / SS

Hidden Talent: Skeletal Flexibility (Active)

Target: Thorn

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: B / A

Endurance: C / B

Speed: D / D

Reflexes: C / B

Hidden Talent: Grappling Mastery (Active)

Target: Ketch

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: B

Strength: D / C

Endurance: B / A

Speed: D / D

Reflexes: D / C

Hidden Talent: Willpower Fortitude (Active)

Target: Iris

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: B

Strength: D / D

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / B

Reflexes: B / A

Hidden Talent: Anatomical Precision (Active)

Target: Dorian

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: S

Strength: D / A

Endurance: D / S

Speed: C / A

Reflexes: D / S

Hidden Talent: Adaptive Evolution (Locked)

Target: Sage

Class: F

Overall Potential Tier: A

Strength: B / A

Endurance: C / B

Speed: C / B

Reflexes: C / B

Hidden Talent: Combat Instinct (Active)

the end....

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