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Is it wrong to make bonds in a dungeon?

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Is it wrong to make bonds in a dungeon?

Hey everyone!

This is my first time writing fiction. I recently got into reading DanMachi fanfics, but I noticed that there aren’t many completed stories where the main love interests are Ryuu, Riveria, Ais, and Asfi. Some stories feature them individually or as part of a harem, but most of those are either incomplete or abandoned. So, I decided—why not write one myself?

I know my English isn't perfect (it’s not my first language), but I’ll do my best to keep improving as I go. I'm learning with every word I write, and constructive criticism is always welcome.

I’ve only watched the DanMachi anime, so I’ll be relying mainly on the wiki and other available resources for information. If any of you know a good place to get detailed lore, character backstories, or world-building info, please let me know!

For some time now, I've been reading fanfiction from all kinds of fandoms, but recently, I've found myself obsessed with DanMachi fanfiction. I wasn't that big of a fan before—maybe I just couldn't see the beauty of the anime back when I first watched it as a teenager. (Though even then, I found characters like Ryuu, Riveria, Ais, and Asfi really interesting and attractive.)

Lately, I binge-watched the first four seasons and read at least a dozen fanfictions. Sadly, pretty much all of them were incomplete. And I noticed something that really stood out to me—there wasn't a single fanfic where all the girls I liked were present together and given equal importance. Usually, either one heroine got the spotlight while others were ignored, or Hestia was overly focused on, while the others felt like afterthoughts.

Don't get me wrong—I don't hate Hestia. I just don't like her that much. So in my story, I will do my absolute best to give each of the heroines equal love and attention. And if I ever decide to expand the harem with more characters in the future, I'll make sure they're not treated like collectibles but like people—with emotions, growth, and screen time.

I know this won't be easy. Even experienced and talented authors struggle with balancing large casts, but I'm committed to trying my best. This is my first time writing a story, so all I can promise is to give it my all.

If you've made it this far, thank you. Thank you for picking up this novel and giving it your time. I truly hope this story is worth your while. But I won't lie—I'm writing this more for myself than for anyone else. There might be aspects you won't agree with, and that's okay. I just hope you enjoy the journey regardless.

I recommend that you push through the first 20 to 30 chapters. The grammar and phrasing improve later on. In the future, I would also edit these chapters.

(I have started a little rewrite nothing major is changing just correcting grammar and increasing the flow.)

Note: This fanfic is reuploaded because previously I chose Novel as the type instead of Fanfic.

I hope you enjoy this journey with me. And please, go easy on me—this is just the beginning :)

Happy Reading!

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