SYNC: 45%
Owen stood on the old stone foundation in the middle of the Fenwild and did Rising Cut at nothing.
Right foot back. Sword low on the left. Push off. Rotate. Cut up and across. Exhale.
[Rising Cut]
No Imprecise. Just the name, in clean white letters, and the blade moving through the air with a sharp little hiss it hadn't had before. His avatar's hips turned when his hips turned. The sword arrived where he'd sent it.
It wasn't ninety-eight percent. It wasn't even close. There was still that softness, the half-beat lag, the glove a size too big. But the form had registered, and Owen felt something in his chest go tight in a way that had nothing to do with his heart.
He did it four more times just to watch the words appear. A passing player gave him a look usually reserved for people talking to pigeons. Fair.
Then he got to work.
The reed loop was better with a real attack in it.
Sling. The stone went a little left, clipped a mire rat on the shoulder, and the rat came wading through the reeds at seventy percent speed while Owen walked backward at a hundred. When it got close, Rising Cut, full damage, and the rat flinched and lost a third of its health. Back Step. Sling. Rising Cut. Dead.
Twenty seconds a rat, down from forty.
He fell into the rhythm and stayed there. This was the part of Vael Online that people who'd never played it didn't understand. It wasn't the big fights or the bosses. It was this: a loop, a pattern, a little puzzle you solved with your feet, over and over, until the solving got smooth. Owen had spent thousands of hours in loops like this one. He'd just never had a body that could keep up with his head.
His phone timer chimed after an hour.
[Reminder: Drink. Stand up.]
In his first life, he had literally never stood up mid-session on purpose. You lost your spot. You lost momentum. You lost the rhythm.
He logged out anyway.
Ten seconds lying still. Headset off. Real room, real body, a little dizzy. He stood up, drank a third of the bottle, did ten slow squats that made his thighs shake in a way that was honestly embarrassing, and walked to the end of the hall and back. Maddie's door was open. She was on her bed reading, and she looked up and saw him walking in a circle in his socks.
"What are you doing?"
"Moving."
"Why?"
"Because I'm a skeleton."
She considered this, decided it was fair, and went back to her book.
Four minutes. He lay down. Headset on.
[Baseline synchronization estimate: 46%]
He stared at it.
He had never, not once in fourteen years, logged back in at a higher number than he'd logged out. Every break in his first life had been peanut butter and energy drinks and lying back down as fast as possible, and his number had always sagged across a day like a tire with a slow leak. Forty-nine in the morning, forty-four by night.
Four minutes. A glass of salty chocolate water and ten bad squats.
They knew, he thought. The pod companies, Lattice, the big guilds, all of them. And everybody else just thought they were bad at the game.
By four in the afternoon he was Level 6.
[Status]
Name: Rook | Level: 6 | Track: Vanguard
HP: 220/220 | Stamina: 183/183
STR 9 | AGI 16 | END 17 | FOC 4 | SPI 4
Forms: Rising Cut (45%), Back Step (40%)
Traits: Reedwalker
SYNC: 46%
Four into Endurance, four into Agility, two into Strength. Boring, safe, and right. Every guide he'd ever written told new Vanguards to dump points into Strength for the big early numbers, and every guide was wrong, because big numbers didn't matter if you were dead. He'd been wrong about that in his own guides for three years before he worked it out.
He also remembered, more or less, that the week-three patch would nerf Copper Bell drops and send bell prices to the moon before they crashed to nothing. In his first life he'd bought high and lost every coin he had. He couldn't remember if it was the Tuesday or the Wednesday patch. That was going to be a problem.
He sold forty rat tails to a passing player for less than they were worth, because the coin mattered now and the tails wouldn't sell to NPCs until the leatherworker opened her shop in two days. Then he went back to the loop.
And the marsh had changed.
At noon, the Fenwild had been a scattering of confused new players. Now the edges were crowded, and the crowd had a shape to it. Groups of four, all wearing the same dark grey tabard with a little white tower stitched on the chest. They were sweeping the rat spawns along the south edge in lines, fast and clean, and every one of them moved like water.
Iron Hollow.
Owen knew the whole saga, start to finish, like a soap opera he'd watched too many seasons of. In eight months the founder, a guy called Corran, would sell the guild bank to a gold-farming outfit and vanish, and the officers would spend a year suing each other over pixels. Right now, Corran was a smiling dude in a grey tabard yelling GOOD PULL, BOYS at rats.
Enjoy it, buddy. Your guild chat is going to be a war crime.
Owen watched them from the stone foundation for a minute. The guild wasn't famous yet. On launch day, they were just a group of very well-funded people in matching shirts. In six months, Iron Hollow would be the biggest guild on the North American server, and its founders would be on talk shows explaining that competitive VR was "about mindset."
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They had thirty pods. Thirty players at a guaranteed ninety-eight percent. Owen could see the difference from here: the way their forms snapped out instantly, the way they dodged rat lunges that hadn't even fully started yet. They were Level 5 and 6 too, and they'd gotten there by being in the right place with perfect bodies they'd bought.
He'd gotten there by knowing where the reeds were.
One of them, a tall guy with a two-handed axe, noticed him and pointed. The four of them talked. Then one waded a few steps into the reeds toward the foundation, and Owen saw her slow down. Reed terrain. Thirty percent. Even at ninety-eight percent sync, she moved like someone walking through a swimming pool.
She frowned, then waded back out.
Owen pulled another rat. He didn't look at them again. There was no point being angry at people for buying something he couldn't afford. In his first life he'd spent years being angry at them, and all it had gotten him was a sore jaw from clenching his teeth inside a headset. This time he was going to spend that energy somewhere it would actually do something.
He knew what would happen next. In about a week, someone would post the Mill Race trick, and Reedwalker would stop being rare, and Iron Hollow would buy it from players for a lot of gold. By then he'd be gone from this marsh. But today the reeds were his.
At 5:30 his body started to complain.
Not dramatically. A dull pressure in his lower back. Restless legs. A faint hunger headache, the kind that sat right behind the eyes. And in the corner of his vision, the number started to slide.
SYNC: 45%
SYNC: 44%
He felt it in the forms first. Rising Cut came out clean, then clean, then Imprecise, then clean again. Flickering, like a bulb about to go. A rat that should have died in two hits needed three and bit him on the way.
HP: 202/220
Owen backed off to the foundation and stood there, thinking.
In his first life, this was where he'd have pushed through. Two more hours. Another energy drink. The number would sag to forty and he'd blame the game, or the servers, or his own bad talent, and keep going.
Instead he did the math. He was Level 6. The next good grinding spot, the ledge above the Sunken Quarry, opened up properly at 8, and it was crowded in the evenings. Tomorrow morning, early, it would be empty. He didn't need two more hours of garbage forms tonight.
What he needed was dinner.
He looked at the guild players down at the south edge, still sweeping in perfect lines, never slowing. Their bodies were lying in pods somewhere being massaged and fed through a tube. They could stay in for days.
Owen's body was lying on a twin bed under a blanket with cartoon dinosaurs on it that he'd forgotten to throw away. It was eighteen, and skinny, and it wanted food.
That was fine. That was what he was working with.
He logged out at 5:42.
Dinner was spaghetti with the cheap jar sauce, which in the Callery house meant somebody was tired. His mom was up, in sweats now, hair wet from a shower. His dad was setting the table, which was rare. Maddie was pretending to help.
Owen sat down and ate two plates without stopping.
"Okay," his mom said, watching him. "Report. How's your experiment?"
He told them. He kept it simple. The headset read your body. When he drank the stuff on the napkin and stood up every hour, the number went up. When he got hungry and stiff, it went down.
His dad looked skeptical. Maddie looked fascinated. His mom put her fork down and looked like she was thinking very hard.
"What's the number mean?" she asked. "Exactly?"
"How much of what I'm trying to do actually happens. Like at forty-four percent, if I swing a sword, it's slow and off, and some moves don't work at all. The best people are in the nineties."
"How do they get that high?"
"They pay for it," Owen said. "There are pods. Like a bed that takes care of your body for you. Forty thousand dollars. They give everybody ninety-eight, no matter what kind of shape they're in."
His dad whistled. "Forty grand for a video game bed."
"What about the headset?" his mom asked. "What's the best you can get on the one you have?"
"Eighty. That's the hardware limit." He shrugged. "Nobody gets near it."
"Because nobody tries," his mom said slowly.
Owen looked at her.
"Think about it," she said. "Every night shift, we've got nurses who sleep four hours and live on vending-machine food, and nurses who eat right and run in the morning. You can see the difference by hour ten. Who catches the mistakes. Who has steady hands with an IV. It's not talent." She picked up her fork again. "It's maintenance. Your body's an instrument. If the headset's reading the instrument, then tune the instrument."
There was a pause.
"Did you just call our son a violin," his dad said.
"I'm making a point, Rick."
"I'm a violin," Owen said, and Maddie laughed so hard she snorted, and his dad laughed at her, and his mom tried to stay serious and failed.
When it settled, his mom pulled the napkin from earlier off the fridge, where somebody had stuck it under a magnet, and turned it over.
"Okay. If you're serious," she said, "here's what I'd do. Sleep, first. Eight hours. That's the biggest one, and it's free. Water through the day, not all at once. Real food, protein at every meal, fewer sugar crashes. And move. Not a little. A lot. Walk, run, lift something. The stronger and better conditioned your body is, the cleaner the signal it sends."
She wrote while she talked, small neat nurse handwriting.
"And you lie still in that thing for hours," she added. "That's bad for you no matter what number it gives you. Muscles waste. Circulation gets lazy. You get up every hour, like you did today. I mean it."
"I will," Owen said.
His mom looked up at him. It was the same look again, the patient-history look, but there was something else under it now. Something careful. Like she was afraid to get her hopes up.
"Okay," she said quietly. "Then I'll help."
After dinner, he did the dishes. Nobody had asked him to. Maddie watched him from the doorway like he was a nature documentary.
Then he went out to the garage, where his dad had a rusty weight bench and a set of plates under a tarp, the remains of another January diet. Owen pulled off the tarp. He loaded the bar with the smallest plates he could find and lay down on the bench.
He managed eight presses before his arms gave out. On the ninth, the bar came down on his chest and stayed there, and he lay under it, wheezing, until his dad came out and lifted it off with one hand.
"Ambitious," Rick said.
"Yeah."
His dad looked at the bar, then at Owen, then at his own belly. "Seven o'clock tomorrow, right? This walk?"
"Seven."
"Huh." Rick rubbed the back of his neck. "Doctor said I should be walking, last year. Never did." He was quiet a second. "Maybe make it six-thirty. Before it gets busy."
Owen's throat did something complicated. "Six-thirty," he said.
Back in his room, he wrote it all down.
Not the game stuff. He'd never needed to write that down; it lived in his head like a second language. He wrote the other stuff. A cheap spiral notebook from the bottom of his desk drawer, first page:
Sat Mar 14. Login 44%. After 2h: 42%. After lunch + walk: 45%. After 1h + water + squats: 46%. Late afternoon, hungry: 44%.
Dad: walk 6:30.
Theo: ???
Maddie: laughed at dinner.
He looked at the list for a while. In his first life, he'd kept spreadsheets of everything. Drop rates, respawn timers, damage numbers for every weapon in the game across four expansions. He'd never once written down anything about his own life, because it hadn't seemed like data.
He added one more line at the bottom.
Bench: 8 reps. Pathetic. Do 9 tomorrow.
He did not log back in that night.
That was the hardest part of the whole day. Launch night. He could feel it, the pull, all those players in Harrowgate and the Fenwild and the first people stumbling into the Sunken Quarry. Somewhere, somebody was taking his spot on the ledge. Somebody was finding a quest he knew about. Somewhere, Iron Hollow was grinding in perfect lines in their perfect pods, getting further ahead every hour.
In his first life, he would've played until four in the morning.
He lay in bed at ten-thirty, with the headset on the nightstand and the lights off. The glow-in-the-dark stars were still on the ceiling. Seven of them glowed now, faintly. The rest had given up years ago.
His body hurt. His arms were shaking from eight presses. His stomach was full.
He checked his phone one last time. A message from Theo, his best friend, from two hours earlier.
Theo: BRO where are you?? I'm level 3 in this marsh and I keep dying to rats lol. You playing tomorrow??
In his first life, Owen had read this message, said busy, and played with a guild of strangers instead. He and Theo had stopped talking by summer. Theo had quit the game in a month and then, eventually, quit calling.
Owen typed back.
Owen: Tomorrow. Noon. Meet me at the bakery in Harrowgate. I'll show you where the rats can't catch you.
He put the phone face down and closed his eyes.
Tomorrow the headset would read a body that had slept eight hours, eaten dinner with its family, and pressed a bar eight times. It wasn't much.
It was more than the first time.