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Several weeks passed quietly inside Steel Armor Shelter.
During that time, Chen Yu continuously hunted ordinary creatures around the beginner hunting grounds.
Black Iron Rats.
Ragged White Rabbits.
Wild Dogs.
Ordinary creatures that most experienced hunters ignored completely.
But Chen Yu never became impatient.
Every hunt increased his ordinary geno points steadily.
Every battle improved his control over combat.
And eventually—
his ordinary geno points finally reached the limit.
Inside his room, Chen Yu silently looked toward the translucent panel floating before him.
[Sanctuary Panel]
Name: Chen Yu
Age: 16
Ordinary Geno Points: 100 / 100
Primitive Geno Points: 0
Mutant Geno Points: 0
Sacred Geno Points: 0
Super Geno Points: 0
Chen Yu slowly exhaled.
His body felt noticeably stronger compared to when he first entered the sanctuary.
His muscles contained greater explosive force.
His stamina improved significantly.
Even his reaction speed had become much sharper.
But Chen Yu remained calm.
Maxed ordinary geno points did not mean invincibility.
Primitive creatures were still dangerous.
Especially groups.
During previous hunts, Chen Yu had already secretly observed several primitive creature territories from a distance.
He never approached recklessly.
Only watched.
Memorized.
Analyzed.
Primitive creatures possessed much stronger bodies than ordinary creatures.
Many beginner hunters died because they became arrogant after reaching maximum ordinary geno points.
Chen Yu had no intention of becoming one of them.
Inside the sanctuary, survival was more important than pride.
After several days of preparation, Chen Yu finally selected his target.
Black Horn Pig.
A primitive creature that usually traveled in small groups.
Fast.
Violent.
Extremely dangerous when charging directly.
Fortunately, Chen Yu had discovered a lone Black Horn Pig separated from the herd near a rocky forest area several kilometers away from Steel Armor Shelter.
For two entire hours, Chen Yu silently tracked the creature through the wilderness.
He did not attack carelessly.
Instead, he carefully observed:
movement habits
patrol routes
resting locations
blind spots
Only after fully confirming the creature was isolated did Chen Yu finally move.
The Black Horn Pig lowered its head while searching for food beneath nearby trees.
Its dark body looked far larger than ordinary creatures.
Sharp black horns curved forward dangerously.
Even from a distance, Chen Yu could feel the pressure primitive creatures emitted.
Much stronger than ordinary lifeforms.
Chen Yu hid silently behind a large rock while tightening his grip around the military knife.
His breathing slowed gradually.
Then—
he moved.
Using the rocky terrain for cover, Chen Yu rushed forward suddenly.
The Black Horn Pig reacted instantly.
But Chen Yu was faster.
After reaching 100 ordinary geno points, his physical abilities had already surpassed normal beginners greatly.
Chen Yu stepped sideways at the last moment before slashing directly toward the creature's neck.
Blood splashed across the ground.
The Black Horn Pig roared violently and charged forward crazily.
Trees shook from the impact.
Chen Yu immediately retreated instead of confronting it directly.
Primitive creatures were still primitive creatures.
Even injured, they remained dangerous.
Several minutes later, after losing too much blood, the Black Horn Pig's movements gradually slowed.
Chen Yu seized the opportunity instantly.
He rushed forward and stabbed directly through the creature's eye.
The giant body collapsed heavily onto the ground.
Silence returned to the forest.
Then—
a notification appeared inside his mind.
[Primitive Creature: Black Horn Pig killed.]
[Beast Soul discovered.]
The moment those words appeared, Chen Yu's expression changed slightly.
Grey light slowly emerged from the corpse.
And at the same moment—
the cracked grey-black Hōgyoku inside the Sea of Consciousness trembled faintly for the first time since ordinary evolution reached completion.
The primitive beast soul transformed into light instantly before being absorbed directly into the orb.
The Hōgyoku had started absorbing again.
Primitive stage.
Chen Yu quietly watched the scene.
The cracks covering the orb still showed no signs of recovery.
Still damaged.
Still dormant.
But now he finally understood.
The Hōgyoku had simply completed ordinary evolution capacity before.
Now…
it had begun collecting primitive evolution data instead.
After calming himself, Chen Yu carried part of the Black Horn Pig meat toward a hidden safe location nearby.
Primitive creature meat was extremely valuable for beginners.
Not only because of primitive geno points—
but because consuming primitive flesh would strengthen the body far beyond ordinary limits.
As night slowly descended across the wilderness, Chen Yu sat quietly beside a small fire while looking at the freshly cooked primitive meat before him.
For the first time since entering God's Sanctuary…
he had officially stepped into the primitive stage.