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Chapter 14: The Script of Vicious Pride

The General's daughter

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Eleanor lowered the holopad and studied her daughter.

Yesterday, Ramona had collapsed during the High Command briefing, pale and trembling. Today, she sat upright, eyes clear and calculating. Beneath the antiseptic, the room smelled faintly of fever and overheated circuitry. Ramona seemed to notice neither.

Eleanor turned toward the medic. “Dismissed.”Full novel: The General's daughter — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

“General Eleanor, her fever—”

“Is no longer your concern. And you will not repeat a word about her condition. Unless you'd like to spend the rest of your career cleaning acid filters in the lower maintenance sub-levels of New Mercury.”

The medic swallowed and hurried out.

Eleanor approached the cot. “You've been unconscious for two days. You're supposed to be resting.”

Ramona pushed aside the blanket and planted her boots on the steel floor. Cold. Another floor. Blood beneath the eastern blast doors. The sensations came without sequence: steel, copper, an alarm pulse. Memory, fever vision, or something still to come. She could not tell.

Since waking, the visions had offered sensations without explanations: a smell, a pressure change, a voice, a flash of color. No date, cause, or face. The present was whatever others could confirm—the floor beneath her boots, Eleanor’s voice, the holopad’s blue light. Everything else remained possible.

The eastern gate appeared in every fragment. Sealed. Burning. Once beneath her hand. Each version ended before it opened.

“I've rested enough.”

She reached for the tactical harness on the nearby chair and fastened it across her torso.

Eleanor’s gaze flicked to Ramona’s unsteady knees. “You've never worn that harness without complaining about how restrictive it is.”

“It keeps my hands free.”

“Since when?”

“Since I needed them.”

Eleanor studied the buckles. “You woke up with a new set of priorities.”

“Maybe I woke up with the old ones.”

“Give me one reason not to put you back in bed.”

“Current weapons inventory.”

“You want a report?”

“I want the numbers. Food, fuel, medical supplies, ammunition, perimeter strength. Everything.”

“You wake up from a fever and start auditing my command?”

“Someone has to read the ledger before the shelves are empty.”

“Your father has a staff for that.”

“Then show me what they missed.”

The words landed hard. Before Eleanor could answer, the holopad chimed.

She grimaced. “The United Nations directive wants half our localized ammunition reserves transferred to the parliamentary peacekeepers.”

Ramona held out her hand. “Show me.”

The authorization seal glowed blue, exactly as it had in the memory she could not stop reliving. The blue light was real. The shouting and smoke belonged elsewhere.

“They're taking the northern defense rounds,” Ramona said.

“Yes.”

“And leaving us the older stock.”

“Yes.”

“They're stripping our perimeter to reinforce the capital.”

“That’s what the UN order says.”

“Reject it.”

“I was planning to.”

“Then don't wait.”

Eleanor’s eyes flashed. “You’re very sure of yourself for someone who can barely stand.”

“The ammunition won’t care how steady I am.”

For a moment, Eleanor’s composure slipped. Then her mouth curved into a thin smile.

“They'll threaten Father's command.”

“They already have.”

“Let them.”

Eleanor studied her. “You sound comfortable defying the United Nations.”

“I sound tired of watching the same mistake arrive in different uniforms.”

“From whom?”

Ramona remembered the UN Security chamber afterward: burnt insulation, her father’s empty chair, and Eleanor beneath red emergency lights with blood drying on her sleeve. The image ended before anyone spoke.

“From watching you obey people you despise.”

Silence sharpened between them.

Ramona crossed to the steel desk and picked up General Marcus Monroe's heavy-caliber sidearm. She checked the energy magazine and locked it into place.

Eleanor’s eyebrows rose. “Since when do you know how to handle your father's sidearm?”

“Since I started paying attention.”

“Who taught you?”

“The people who assumed I wasn’t watching.”

Before Eleanor could press further, Ramona asked, “Where is Father?”

“War room.” Eleanor retrieved her holopad and followed her toward the blast doors. “He's reviewing the winter migration projections.”

“Then we go there.”

Eleanor stopped. “You're barely standing.”

“Then I'll stand while we talk.”

“You don't get to turn one fever into a declaration of independence.”

Ramona glanced back. “You don't get to call it a fever if you need me to stay put.”

A reluctant laugh escaped Eleanor, then faded.

“There she is.”

“Who?”

“My daughter.”

Ramona looked at her. “You say that like you misplaced me.”

The humor left Eleanor’s face.

“You were always too willing to make yourself smaller,” she said. “I thought it was because you wanted peace.”

“I wanted approval.”

“You had mine.”

“No. You had my back. You kept telling everyone I was fragile, then wondered why they treated me like I was.”

Eleanor flinched.

Ramona hated that she still knew exactly where to strike—and still felt the pull to soften and protect the woman who had spent years protecting her.

“You didn't protect me,” Ramona said. “You hid me.”

“I kept you alive.”

“You kept me uninformed.”

“Because every truth in this house became a weapon.”

“Then you should have taught me how to hold one.”

Eleanor looked away.

“You won't get approval from the UN.”

“I don't need it anymore.”

“That is not the same as being ready to lose what it buys you.”

Ramona stepped through the blast doors. “I know.”

Eleanor caught her arm. The grip was firm and familiar. Ramona leaned toward it before forcing herself still.

“Do you?” Eleanor asked. “I remember the last time you decided knowing was enough. You walked into the eastern district alone because you thought your father would finally see you as useful.”

“And you remember what happened?”

“I remember carrying you out.”

“No. You remember the version where I was reckless and you were right.”

“I remember your blood on my uniform.”

“And I remember you telling everyone I had fainted.”

“Because the UN delegates would have used your mistake to remove you.”

“Because you were ashamed of me.”

“Because I was terrified.”

The admission stopped them.

“You think I kept you small because I didn’t believe in you,” Eleanor said. “I knew what they did to people who became inconvenient. I had already watched them take your father apart piece by piece. I would not hand them you.”

Ramona wanted to reject it, but Eleanor’s fear lived in the tremor she hid from officers and the way she threatened a medic rather than let anyone see Ramona vulnerable.

“You should have trusted me with the danger,” Ramona said.

“I should have trusted you with the truth.”

Neither apology repaired the years between them, but neither stepped away.

The command corridor beyond was crowded with officers, technicians, and soldiers moving crates toward the northern elevators. Everyone made room for Eleanor.

Ramona watched them. In the fragments, she had mistaken that deference for fear. Now she understood it was trust. She also remembered the elevators sealing and the eleven minutes before anyone admitted the eastern line had failed.

Eleanor caught up beside her. “If you're going to challenge the UN directive, you'd better have something stronger than confidence.”

“I do.”

“What?”

Ramona looked toward the northern tactical display. “A pattern.”

Eleanor’s steps slowed. “Patterns can be made to say anything.”

“So can orders.”

“Ramona.”

“Not here.”

“Who has access to the eastern gate controls?”

Eleanor’s expression changed. “Why?”

“Because every version of this ends with the gate open.”

“And you think someone inside the compound will open it?”

Ramona looked at her mother. For one instant, the image returned: Eleanor beneath red emergency lights, blood on her sleeve, one hand on the eastern gate console. The vision had never shown whether the blood was hers, or whether Eleanor was opening the gate or trying to close it.

“I think someone will.”

The corridor shook.

A deep explosion rolled beneath the compound. Officers grabbed the walls. Equipment rattled. Emergency lights flashed before the main power stabilized.

“Get me the perimeter feed,” Ramona said.

Eleanor saw her expression and issued the order. “Eastern feed. Now.”

Static filled the display before resolving into the eastern industrial district. Smoke rose beyond the outer wall.

An officer hurried toward them. “General, the eastern pressure line just ruptured. No casualties reported.”

Ramona stared at the timestamp. The numbers were real. The smoke was real. What followed was not yet.

“Shut down nonessential traffic through the eastern sector.”

Eleanor studied her. “Why?”

“Because the next failure won't be underground.”

“You're certain?”

Ramona watched the smoke shear sideways in the wind. “No. But I remember what happened next.”

Eleanor’s face went still. “You remember.”

“You heard me.”

“And you expect me to act on a memory you refuse to explain?”

“I expect you to act while it’s still only a warning.”

“That isn't how command works.”

“No,” Ramona said. “It’s how you keep a warning from becoming a report.”

For one dangerous second, Eleanor looked like a mother deciding whether to embrace her daughter or put her under guard. Then she turned to the command staff.

“Lock the eastern sector. Pull two perimeter squads from reserve and put them on standby. Nobody moves ammunition out of this compound until I authorize it.”

The officers obeyed.

Eleanor stepped beside Ramona. “War room. You're going to tell your father everything you can.”

Ramona nodded. “And Mother?”

“Yes?”

“When the UN calls, don't negotiate.”

Eleanor’s eyes narrowed with a dangerous smile. “I wasn't planning to.”

“This time, don't ask Father first.”

The smile sharpened. “Go to the war room, Ramona.”

Ramona started forward, then paused. “You believe me.”

Eleanor’s gaze moved to the smoke, then to the sealed eastern corridor.

“I believe you’re afraid,” she said.

“That isn't the same thing.”

“No.” Eleanor looked at her. “But I’ve been wrong about what your fear means before.”

Ramona held her eyes. “And if I’m wrong?”

“Then I’ll take responsibility for the lockdown.”

“You’ll let them blame you?”

“I’ve let them blame me for worse.”

Ramona nodded once. “Then I’ll tell you everything I remember.”

“Even the parts that make you look guilty?”

Ramona’s throat tightened. “Especially those.”

Eleanor reached for her, stopped, and let her hand fall.

“Stay beside me,” Eleanor said.

It was not an order. That was why Ramona obeyed.

Together, they headed toward the war room.

Behind them, another tremor rolled beneath the compound.

This time, Ramona didn't flinch.

She knew the enemy was coming.

Or thought she did.

The corridor lights went dark.

For several seconds, there was only the fading tremor beneath their feet, the ragged breathing of the officers around them, and the soft electronic hiss of systems trying to restart.

No one spoke.

Somewhere ahead, metal scraped against metal.

Eleanor’s hand found Ramona’s arm in the darkness. “Don’t move.”

Ramona felt the urge to pull free, to prove she could stand on her own. Instead, she stayed beneath Eleanor’s grip, listening to the commander’s breathing and the mother’s pulse against her sleeve.

A speaker clicked once.

Then again.

Static breathed through the command corridor, thin and wet, as if something on the other end were learning how to use the connection.

The speaker crackled.

A voice whispered, “Stop them—”

It broke apart into static.

Ramona’s breath caught. The cadence was familiar: the slight catch before the final word, the flattening meant to hide fear.

The speaker clicked off.

Then every command display in the corridor flickered awake at once.

For an instant, each screen showed the eastern gate: sealed, burning, open.

Eleanor pulled Ramona behind her. “Who’s on the channel?”

No one answered.

The speakers came alive again.

This time the voice was clear.

“Stop them before they remember who opened the eastern gate.”

Ramona froze.

It was hers—the rasp left by fever, the breathless pause between words, the fracture at the edge of her voice when she was trying not to cry.

Her own voice had just spoken through the command speakers.

Then the speakers died.

In the darkness, Eleanor’s grip tightened around her arm.

And from somewhere beyond the sealed eastern gate, Ramona heard herself whisper:

“Open it.”

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