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Chapter 17: The Ashes of Pride

The Life of PRAISEWORTHY

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The back room of the Blue Anchor billiards hall was choked with stale tobacco smoke and the acrid stench of spilled gin.

Barlas sat alone at the long mahogany table, a bottle of dark rum resting near his elbow. His eyes, rimmed with red, stared fixedly at the rusted iron padlock his enforcers had brought back from the flour mill—the lock Hunza had refused to open.

"They're calling you a ghost, boss," muttered Leo, standing near the doorway with his hands shoved deep into his denim jacket pockets. "Along the produce lanes, on the canal bridges... even the street vendors are taking down your ledger sheets. They know Old Man Rashid and Mr. Farooq went up to the boy’s third-floor room themselves."Full novel: The Life of PRAISEWORTHY — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

Barlas slammed his heavy fist onto the table, making the glasses rattle.

"An undocumented boy!" Barlas growled, his voice a ragged, poisonous rasp. "An eighteen-year-old beggar who sleeps on a woven mat! He thinks because he lifted a cargo rig and locked a gate, he can walk through my district without paying my tax? He thinks Farooq's paper protects him from me?"

"It's not just the boy anymore, Barlas," Leo said softly, stepping back toward the exit. "Mr. Farooq brought the signed employment affidavit to the district council. Old Man Rashid is at the maritime hall right now. He isn't just warning you off—he’s calling the council of elders."

Barlas stood up so fast his heavy wooden chair crashed onto the floorboards. His teeth gritted, a frantic, desperate pride burning behind his eyes. In the underworld of District 4, losing money was tolerable, but losing fear was a sentence of death.

"Let Rashid call his old men," Barlas spat, pulling a heavy iron crowbar from behind the counter. "Inspectors can be bought, paper affidavits can be burned, and clean boys can be broken. I won't be pushed out of the grain district by a boy who hasn't even seen his own child born."

The Council at the Maritime Hall

Across the canal, inside the cavernous, high-ceilinged Maritime Workers' Hall, the atmosphere was starkly different. The air smelled of salt air, old teak, and burning oil lanterns.

Seated in a wide semi-circle around the central timber table were seven men—the senior union stewards, the head of the merchant fleet, and the most respected elders of District 4. At the center sat Old Man Rashid, his hands resting on his wooden walking stick, and Mr. Farooq, who laid three items on the table: a jar of contaminated grain, a police report of Barlas’s past extortion, and Hunza’s clean work register.

"Barlas didn't just target a mill," Farooq addressed the council, his deep voice echoing against the high rafters. "He tried to dump industrial solvent into three tons of flour meant for the bakeries of this neighborhood. He tried to starve our people to force a boy into his debt network."

A low murmur of anger rippled through the gathered elders.

"We built this enclave so our people could survive without being crushed by corrupt city officials or street thugs," said Captain Vargas, the oldest dockmaster on the water. "If a boy can stand guard at a gate, work twelve hours a night for seven hundred clean pesos, and refuse a single centavo of dirty money, he is the kind of man who keeps District 4 alive."

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Old Man Rashid stood up slowly, his tall, lean frame casting a long shadow across the timber floor. He tapped his walking stick three times against the floorboards.

"The verdict is clear," Rashid declared, his voice cutting through the room like iron. "Barlas has broken the pact of the district. His ledgers are canceled. His collectors are banished from the grain lanes, the produce markets, and the residential tenements. If he or his men touch Hunza Ludo, his family, or Farooq’s mill, they answer to every crane operator, dock worker, and shopkeeper from the harbor to the bypass road."

The seven elders stood as one, raising their hands in unanimous agreement.

The Shadow at the Threshold

It was 4:00 AM. A quiet, cool fog had rolled off the bay, cloaking the narrow alley behind Farooq Flour Mills in heavy white mist.

Hunza stood near the rear intake chute, his wooden flashlight tucked into his belt, his ears tuned to the quiet dripping of moisture from the roof.

A single set of heavy, unhurried footsteps sounded from the dark alleyway.

Hunza didn't run. He shifted his hips into his stable, low stance, his broad 90-kilogram frame filling the narrow passage between the brick wall and the grain silo.

Out of the fog stepped Barlas himself. He was alone, his face twisted in a cold, sneering mask, the heavy iron crowbar swinging loosely at his side.

"You took everything, didn't you, boy?" Barlas whispered, his eyes glinting in the dull streetlight. "My collectors, my ledgers, my respect. Rashid thinks he owns this city. Farooq thinks his paper makes you untouchable. But out here in the dark, it's just you and me."

Hunza looked at the iron bar in Barlas's hand, then met the older man's furious gaze with absolute, undisturbed calm.

"I took nothing from you, Barlas," Hunza said, his voice deep, steady, and devoid of fear. "You lost your respect because you fed on the hunger of poor men. I only wanted to earn clean bread for my wife and child."

Barlas raised the iron bar, his knuckles white, stepping forward to strike. "Your clean bread ends tonight!"

Before Barlas could swing, heavy footsteps rattled the gravel from both ends of the alley.

Out of the fog behind Hunza stepped Mr. Farooq and five broad-shouldered mill drivers holding heavy timber beams. And from the entrance behind Barlas, Old Man Rashid emerged, flanked by a dozen dockworkers carrying iron cargo hooks.

Barlas froze, his arm locked in mid-air, his eyes going wide as he realized he was completely surrounded.

"Lower the bar, Barlas," Rashid said quietly, stepping forward through the mist. "The council has spoken. Your time in District 4 is finished."

Barlas looked around wildly—at the massive wall of working men, at the unyielding elders, and finally at Hunza, who stood motionless, offering no violence, holding no weapon, yet standing unshakeable at the center of the yard.

Slowly, his fingers lost their grip. The iron crowbar fell from Barlas's hand, clattering harmlessly against the wet concrete.

"Get out of our district," Farooq said coldly.

Barlas turned without another word, ducking his head into his coat, and slunk away into the fog, stripped of his power, his territory, and his pride.

Dawn over the Enclave

By 6:30 AM, the morning sun broke through the coastal fog, bathing the flour mill in brilliant, golden light. The heavy grinding stones rumbled into life, and the first delivery truck pulled out of the main gate, loaded high with sacks of pure, untainted flour.

Hunza walked up the wooden stairs of his tenement, the morning air fresh and cool against his face. In his pocket rested his clean wage of ₱700, and in his heart was a peace that no threat could take away.

He pushed open the door. Ayesha was sitting by the sunlit window, holding a cup of warm tea, her face radiant as she looked up at him.

"Is the night over, Hunza?" she asked softly.

Hunza smiled, stepping across the room to sit beside her, placing his broad hand gently over her stomach.

"The night is over, Ayesha," Hunza said softly. "The path is clear."

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