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The Life of PRAISEWORTHY

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Chapter 5: Clean Hands, Heavy Heart

The Life of PRAISEWORTHY

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The tea house sat tucked behind the iron trestles of the District 4 railway line. It was an unassuming spot—a low-roofed wooden shack with fogged-up windows, smelling of steeped jasmine, fried kerosene, and wet wood.

Hunza pushed the creaking wooden door open at precisely 3:48 AM.

Sitting in the far corner under a low hanging lamp was an old woman in a dark cardigan, counting wooden tokens into neat stacks. Sitting across from her was a well-dressed man in his mid-forties—flawless suit jacket, expensive gold wristwatch, and sharp, calculating eyes that immediately sized Hunza up as he crossed the floor.Full novel: The Life of PRAISEWORTHY — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

"You're Rashid’s new runner," the man said, his voice smooth and unhurried. He didn't look impressed by Hunza’s muddy sneakers or his sweat-stained hoodie. "You're late by three minutes."

"The mud near the tracks was thick, uncle," Hunza replied, his voice calm. He reached into his inner jacket pocket, pulled out the thick, wax-sealed brown envelope, and set it carefully onto the wooden table.

The sharp-eyed man picked up the envelope, inspecting the red wax seal closely before breaking it with a small silver letter opener. He slid out a thick ledger and a stack of crisp, banded blue bills. He quickly counted out four ₱500 notes, sliding them across the table toward Hunza.

"Two thousand pesos," the man said. "Rashid spoke highly of your weight in an alley fight. If you can handle heavy drops without opening your mouth, I have a permanent spot for you on the night circuit. Ten thousand pesos a week."

Hunza stared at the four ₱500 notes resting on the dark wood. Ten thousand pesos a week meant total independence. It meant a clean private room for Ayesha, proper hospital care for the delivery, and no longer having to duck his head in shame when his relatives talked about successful cousins.

Then, his eyes drifted to the contents of the opened envelope on the table.

Sliding out alongside the ledger was a small, transparent zip-bag containing a stack of unregistered, blank promissory land titles and pawn receipts stamped with high-interest loan shark logos—the kind of predatory papers used to strip poor neighborhood vendors of their homes and small shops.

Hunza’s chest tightened. The air in the warm tea house suddenly felt suffocating.

What did I just carry?

His heart pounded against his ribs, not from physical exertion, but from a deep, sudden terror. He had spent his whole life feeling slow, lazy, and behind everyone else—but he had never once touched money that came from crushing someone else's life.

Is this halal?

The thought hit him like a physical blow. He wasn't a scholar or a preacher, just an eighteen-year-old boy struggling to survive, but his faith in Allah was the single anchor holding his heavy soul together. If he fed his pregnant wife and his unborn child with income earned from extortion, loan sharks, or criminal harm, what blessing could ever remain in his home?

"Is there a problem, kid?" the man in the suit asked, his eyes narrowing slightly as he noticed Hunza hesitation. "Take the cash."

Hunza slowly reached out and picked up the ₱2,000—his earned pay for delivering the package without knowing its contents beforehand. His hands were broad and rough, but they trembled slightly as he slid the bills into his pocket.

"No problem, uncle," Hunza said softly, putting on his wide, quiet smile, though his eyes were completely clear and serious. "Thank you for the pay."

"What about the weekly circuit?" the man asked, leaning back. "Ten grand a week."

Hunza took a slow, deep breath, stepping back from the table.

"I'll pass, uncle," Hunza said quietly. "My back isn't built for that kind of load."

The man scoffed, shaking his head. "Foolish boy. You'll stay broke in this city playing clean."

Hunza didn't answer. He turned and walked out of the tea house, stepping back into the cold, damp night air of District 4.

The Return Journey

The walk back toward the tenement building felt different now. The ₱2,000 in his pocket was real, hard-earned physical labor from walking through the mud and standing his ground—enough for Ayesha’s immediate medicine and fresh food for the week.

But as he walked under the humming streetlights, his mind was racing.

I can't stay with Old Man Rashid's network, Hunza realized, wiping cold sweat from his forehead. Not if the drops are tied to loan sharks or illegal extortion. I took this run because I was desperate, but I can't build a family on haram money. Allah won't bless a home built on fire.

He pulled out his phone. The screen reflected his tired, stocky face. He opened his notes app and typed out a simple, stark budget:

Ayesha's prenatal checkup: ₱1,500Vitamins: ₱500Remaining: ₱0

He was right back at zero for next month's rent. He needed a real, honest, halal job—something that paid enough to support three people, even if it required the most grueling physical labor the city had to offer.

You're lazy, Hunza, his internal voice nagged at him again. Who hires an eighteen-year-old with no college degree and no experience?

Hunza closed his eyes, stopping at the edge of the footbridge overlooking the sleeping city.

"Ya Allah," Hunza prayed silently, his voice a low whisper in the quiet night. "You know my heart. You know I am weak, forgetful, and slow. But I refuse to feed my child anything that isn't clean. Open a door for me that is purely halal—even if it's the heaviest, hardest work in this city. I will carry it. Just give me a clean path."

A calm settled over his chest. His luck had always been delayed, but he knew deep down that Allah’s timing was never late—it was always precise. He just had to keep moving until the right door opened.

A Light in the Window

By 5:00 AM, the sky was turning a faint, dusty blue over the rooftops. Hunza climbed the three flights of rusted stairs to Ayesha’s apartment, his heavy footsteps echoing softly in the empty stairwell.

He knocked three times in their quiet rhythm.

The lock clicked, and Ayesha opened the door. She looked pale and exhausted, her eyes red from waiting up all night. The moment she saw Hunza standing there—covered in alley mud, his left shoulder stiff, but his eyes peaceful—she let out a long, shuddering breath.

"You were gone so long," she whispered, pulling him inside by his sleeve. "I heard shouting in the alley earlier... I was so scared."

Hunza shut the door and locked it securely. He didn't tell her about the iron pipe, the knife in the mud, or the loan shark ledgers. He simply pulled out the four ₱500 notes and laid them neatly on the small wooden table beside her medicine bottle.

"Two thousand pesos," Hunza said, smiling his warm, genuine smile. "Clean pay for a night's walk. We can go to the clinic tomorrow morning."

Ayesha looked at the money, then up at his tired face, noticing the slight grimace when he moved his left arm. She reached out, gently touching his arm, her eyes filling with quiet tears.

"Hunza... how did you get this?" she asked softly.

Hunza sat down heavily on the floor cushion, leaning his broad back against the wall, taking her hand in his thick, rough palm.

"I carried a package across District 4," Hunza said quietly. "But don't worry. It's the last time I run for those people. Tomorrow, I look for clean work. Honest labor. No shortcuts, no dirty money."

Ayesha squeezed his hand tightly, resting her forehead against his shoulder. "We don't need much, Hunza. As long as it's clean and we have Allah with us, even dry bread is enough."

Hunza closed his eyes, holding his wife close in the small, dim room as the first light of dawn trickled through the window. For the first time in months, despite the swelling bruise on his shoulder and the empty wallet waiting for him next week, his heart felt completely at peace.

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