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THE PEERLESS GENTLEMAN: ETIQUETTE OF THE ABYSS

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Chapter 20: The Evaluation

THE PEERLESS GENTLEMAN: ETIQUETTE OF THE ABYSS

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Arthur spent the first hour of preparation doing something he disliked.

Nothing.

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No student interviews.

No suspicious signatures.

No attempts to uncover what happened beneath the western rampart.

He sat at his desk with a sheet of paper in front of him.

At the top, he had written:

REMEDIATION EVALUATION

Below it were four names.

Seraphine Voss.

Master Corvin.

Instructor Hallen.

Deputy Registrar Harlan.

Arthur stared at the last name.

Then he wrote beneath it:

What does he want?

He crossed it out.

That was the wrong question.

He had learned that much.

People could want several things at once.

Harlan might want Arthur removed.

He might want Arthur frightened.

He might want access to the investigation.

He might simply be following orders.

Arthur wrote another sentence.

What does Harlan gain if I fail?

Better.

Then another.

What does Harlan lose if I pass?

Arthur stopped.

That question bothered him.

Because he didn’t know.

And not knowing was becoming increasingly important.

Mira had taught him that evidence was not the same thing as explanation.

Julian had taught him that prediction could become a weakness.

Perhaps both lessons were pointing toward the same problem.

Arthur had spent his old life believing that enough information allowed a person to control an outcome.

Gallows Edge was becoming very good at proving otherwise.

A knock sounded at the door.

Mira entered.

“You’re still staring at the same page.”

“I’ve made progress.”

“You’ve written four lines.”

“Four useful lines.”

She glanced at them.

“Are you investigating Harlan?”

“No.”

Mira raised an eyebrow.

Arthur pointed at the paper.

“I’m preparing for the evaluation.”

“That looks like investigating.”

“It is risk assessment.”

“What’s the difference?”

“The paperwork.”

She smiled.

“You’re impossible.”

Arthur folded the paper.

“And yet you keep returning.”

“Unfortunately.”

The training yard was empty except for Julian.

Arthur arrived five minutes early.

Julian looked disappointed.

“You’re early.”

“I assumed you’d complain if I wasn’t.”

“I was going to.”

Arthur picked up the practice sword.

“What are we doing?”

“Losing.”

“That’s encouraging.”

Julian drew his own wooden blade.

“Your problem isn’t your sword.”

Arthur waited.

“Your problem is that you’re trying to fight like someone who knows what happens next.”

“I don’t.”

“You act like you do.”

Julian stepped forward.

Arthur raised his guard.

The first strike came from the left.

Arthur blocked.

The second came from below.

He stepped away.

The third never came.

Instead, Julian stopped.

Arthur moved instinctively.

The wooden blade struck his shoulder.

He winced.

“You moved.”

“You stopped.”

“Exactly.”

Arthur stared at him.

Julian lowered the sword.

“You keep reacting to possibilities instead of actions.”

Arthur considered that.

“That’s what you meant yesterday.”

“Now you understand.”

“Unfortunately.”

Julian attacked again.

Arthur forced himself to wait.

Not predict.

Not prepare for every possible movement.

Wait.

Julian’s foot shifted.

Arthur moved.

The strike missed.

Another came.

Arthur blocked.

His wrist hurt.

He stepped back.

Julian followed.

Arthur didn’t retreat in a straight line this time.

He angled away.

The next attack missed by inches.

Julian smiled.

“Better.”

Arthur didn’t answer.

He was concentrating too hard.

His breathing became uneven.

His grip tightened.

Julian noticed.

The next strike landed immediately.

Arthur dropped to one knee.

“Again.”

They continued.

By the end of the session, Arthur had managed to remain standing for nearly two minutes.

Julian hadn’t gone easy on him.

That mattered.

Arthur wiped sweat from his forehead.

“I still can’t beat you.”

“No.”

“Not even close.”

“No.”

Arthur nodded.

“At least you’re honest.”

Julian laughed.

“You’ll beat me eventually.”

Arthur looked at him.

“You sound very confident.”

“I’ve seen how stubborn you are.”

“That isn’t necessarily a compliment.”

“It wasn’t.”

Julian tossed him a small mana crystal.

Arthur caught it.

He stared at it.

“Training payment?”

“No.”

“Then what?”

“You’re going to need it.”

Arthur looked toward the academy towers.

“For the evaluation?”

Julian nodded.

“I know.”

“Don’t waste the crystal.”

Arthur turned it over in his fingers.

“Thank you.”

Julian shrugged.

“Just don’t embarrass me.”

Arthur smiled.

“I’ll try.”

The evaluation began at noon.

The academy made sure everyone knew.

Arthur’s name appeared on the central board.

CADET ARTHUR VALE — REMEDIATION REVIEW

The crowd wasn’t enormous.

It didn’t need to be.

Enough students had heard about the West Tower incident.

Enough had watched Arthur survive the breach.

Enough were curious about the disgraced noble who had somehow climbed eight ranks despite barely knowing how to fight.

Arthur entered the arena.

Voss stood on one side.

Instructor Hallen stood beside her.

Corvin was seated behind them.

Harlan stood at the center.

Arthur stopped.

Harlan looked exactly as he always did.

Neat uniform.

Calm expression.

No visible weapon.

Nothing remarkable.

That made him more suspicious, not less.

“Cadet Vale,” Harlan said.

“Deputy Registrar.”

“You understand the purpose of this evaluation?”

“To determine whether I remain eligible for advanced field training.”

“Correct.”

Arthur glanced toward Voss.

She gave him no reaction.

Harlan continued.

“Your combat performance has improved.”

“Marginally.”

“That is generous.”

Arthur almost smiled.

Harlan didn’t.

“Your theory remains below average.”

“Also accurate.”

“Your survival performance is inconsistent.”

“Very accurate.”

“And your conduct score remains unusually high.”

Arthur looked at the system display above the arena.

CONDUCT: 87

Harlan followed his gaze.

“Your conduct score is the primary reason you remain eligible for reconsideration.”

Arthur’s expression remained neutral.

“Then I suppose I should behave.”

A few students laughed.

Harlan didn’t.

“Begin.”

The first test was combat.

A training construct entered the arena.

Arthur recognized it immediately.

Same model as his previous evaluation.

Only faster.

The construct attacked.

Arthur moved.

The first strike missed.

The second clipped his sleeve.

Arthur changed direction.

The construct followed.

He couldn’t match its strength.

So he stopped trying.

Feet.

Weight.

Movement.

Julian’s voice returned to him.

Don’t predict.

Arthur waited.

The construct stepped forward.

Arthur moved sideways.

Its sword passed through empty air.

He struck the joint behind its knee.

The wooden blade bounced away.

No damage.

Arthur didn’t care.

He wasn’t trying to destroy it.

He was trying to survive.

The construct turned.

Arthur retreated.

Ten seconds.

Twenty.

Thirty.

The crowd became quieter.

At forty seconds, Arthur’s breathing was already heavy.

At fifty, his legs started burning.

At sixty, the construct changed its attack pattern.

Arthur reacted late.

The wooden sword struck his ribs.

Pain flashed through him.

He staggered.

The construct raised its blade again.

Arthur didn’t retreat.

He stepped forward.

The sword passed beside his shoulder.

Arthur’s own blade struck the construct’s wrist.

Its attack stopped.

A bell rang.

COMBAT SURVIVAL: PASS

Arthur lowered his sword.

Not victory.

But progress.

He looked toward Julian.

The other cadet gave him a small nod.

Arthur nodded back.

The second test was magical analysis.

That went worse.

A damaged mana circuit was placed on a table.

Arthur activated Glint of the Monocle.

The world sharpened.

Mana lines became visible.

He could see the damaged section.

He could identify the instability.

But understanding the structure didn’t mean knowing how to repair it.

He tried.

The circuit flickered.

The instructor shook his head.

“Incorrect.”

Arthur stepped back.

He tried again.

Another failure.

The students began whispering.

Arthur ignored them.

On the third attempt, he stopped.

“I don’t know how to repair it.”

Hallen looked at him.

“You have identified the damaged structure.”

“Yes.”

“And yet you can’t correct it.”

“Correct.”

“Why stop?”

“Because attempting something I don’t understand would be irresponsible.”

Hallen stared at him.

Voss’s expression softened slightly.

Harlan remained unreadable.

The system appeared.

[Analysis accuracy: 61%]

[Practical application: 28%]

[Result: Insufficient.]

Arthur accepted it.

Another weakness.

Another number.

No miracle.

That surprised him.

A small table was placed in the center of the arena.

Harlan sat on one side.

Arthur sat on the other.

A contract lay between them.

“Your objective,” Harlan said, “is to obtain access to the lower archive.”

Arthur’s eyes narrowed.

There it was.

The evaluation wasn’t subtle anymore.

“You’ve made the scenario unusually specific.”

“You are being evaluated on negotiation.”

“And the archive?”

“A hypothetical resource.”

Arthur studied the document.

Three clauses.

Two restrictions.

One penalty.

A simple agreement.

Too simple.

He read it again.

Then looked at Harlan.

“What happens if I refuse?”

“You fail the negotiation.”

“And if I accept?”

“You gain temporary access.”

Arthur leaned back.

“What’s the catch?”

“There doesn’t have to be one.”

Arthur smiled.

“There always is.”

A few students laughed.

Harlan remained calm.

“Then find it.”

Arthur read the contract again.

He found nothing.

No hidden wording.

No conflicting clauses.

No penalty buried in the margins.

It was clean.

Almost suspiciously clean.

Arthur looked at Harlan.

“Who drafted this?”

“The academy.”

“Who approved it?”

“The academy.”

“That isn’t an answer.”

“It is the only answer relevant to this exercise.”

Arthur studied him.

Harlan was giving him nothing.

No emotional reaction.

No visible impatience.

No unnecessary information.

Arthur knew this style.

It was defensive negotiation.

Give the opponent nothing they can use.

For the first time, Arthur wondered whether Harlan had studied people like him.

The thought unsettled him.

He looked down at the contract.

Then he did something he rarely did.

He stopped searching for the hidden trap.

“I accept.”

The arena went quiet.

Harlan blinked.

“You haven’t examined the final clause.”

“I did.”

“And?”

“It doesn’t matter.”

Harlan’s eyes narrowed.

Arthur pointed at the contract.

“You’re asking me to negotiate for access.”

“Yes.”

“But the exercise doesn’t say I have to obtain unrestricted access.”

A faint smile appeared on Harlan’s face.

Arthur noticed it.

Too late.

Harlan tapped the contract.

“Correct.”

Arthur looked down.

The final clause stated:

ACCESS MAY BE GRANTED AT THE DISCRETION OF THE AUTHORIZED SUPERVISOR.

Arthur’s expression hardened.

He had accepted a contract that gave Harlan the final decision.

He had fallen into the simplest trap of all.

Not hidden wording.

Incomplete authority.

Harlan closed the document.

“Negotiation failed.”

Arthur sat quietly.

He had lost.

Cleanly.

No excuse.

No clever reversal.

Voss looked disappointed.

Julian looked surprised.

Mira, watching from the side, looked almost impressed.

Arthur stood.

“I’ll remember that.”

Harlan nodded.

“I expect you will.”

The final results appeared above the arena.

COMBAT: 26

MAGICAL THEORY: 32

ANALYSIS: 61

NEGOTIATION: FAILED

CONDUCT: 87

OVERALL REMEDIATION: CONDITIONAL PASS

Arthur stared at the final line.

Conditional.

His advanced field training was restored.

But only under supervision.

His ranking increased from 304 to 298.

Not impressive.

Not terrible.

He had gained six positions.

More importantly, he had lost a negotiation.

In front of half the academy.

Arthur found that strangely useful.

Failure had given him something success couldn’t.

A boundary.

Someone at Gallows Edge understood his habits.

Someone knew exactly where to place a trap Arthur would recognize too late.

As the crowd dispersed, Mira approached.

“You lost.”

“Yes.”

“You look pleased.”

“I don’t.”

“You do.”

Arthur glanced toward Harlan.

“He beat me.”

Mira followed his gaze.

“Do you think he knew how you would react?”

“Yes.”

“That bothers you.”

“Yes.”

She waited.

Arthur picked up his notebook.

“Good.”

Mira frowned.

“Good?”

“If I can be predicted, I can be manipulated.”

He wrote something down.

21.

Someone else can negotiate me.

Then, beneath it:

Find out how.

He closed the notebook.

For the first time since arriving at Gallows Edge, Arthur wasn’t frustrated by discovering an opponent smarter than him.

He was interested.

Because now he knew something important.

The academy wasn’t merely testing whether he could survive.

Somebody was testing whether they could control the way he chose to survive.

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