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Chapter 16: Closer Than They Should Have Gone

Heaven’s Broken Dao

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Nobody slept well.

Tianyun woke twice before dawn for no reason he could name, just a general sense of wrongness sitting on his chest, and both times he lay there a while listening to the others breathe before he managed to drift off again.

By the time the sun actually came up, gray and thin through the vale’s strange, leaning trees, everyone already looked like they’d been awake for it.Full novel: Heaven’s Broken Dao — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

“So,” Feng Li said, over a breakfast nobody was really eating.

“Reconnaissance.

That was the word.

Elder Bao said reconnaissance.” “It was the word,” Chen Hao agreed.

“We fought a four-hundred-year-old stone guardian last night.” “We did.” “That feels like it’s already past reconnaissance.

That feels like several steps past reconnaissance.” Nobody argued with him, exactly.

But nobody agreed out loud either, which Tianyun was starting to understand was its own kind of answer around this group.

Xuan Zhen hadn’t slept at all, as far as anyone could tell, and he looked it — grayer around the edges than usual, wine gourd untouched beside him, which was somehow more alarming than anything the guardian had done.

“We should go back,” Lin Yueqing said.

Not loud.

Just clear.

“We confirmed the cult’s here.

We confirmed there’s something dangerous guarding it.

That’s the job.

Elder Bao said confirm and return.” “There’s a spire back there still doing whatever it’s doing,” Chen Hao said.

“We don’t actually know what that thing is.” “We don’t need to know.

That’s the point of sending a bigger team later.” “A month later.” “Better a month than none of us.” It wasn’t really an argument, not the shouting kind.

More like two people laying out two true things that didn’t fit together very well, and nobody quite ready to say which one mattered more.

Tianyun didn’t say anything for a while.

He was still turning the jade over in his fingers, third fragment sitting warm next to the other two, and thinking about the guardian’s voice sitting behind his teeth.

The vale remembers your shape.

He didn’t know what that meant.

He hadn’t known what any of it meant, really, since a man fell off a cliff and didn’t die.

“I want to see it,” he said finally.

“Just see it.

Not go near it.

Just — look.” Lin Yueqing looked at him like she wanted to argue and wasn’t sure it’d do any good.

“That’s how people die,” she said.

“Wanting to just look.” “Probably,” he admitted.

“I still want to.” She didn’t like it.

He could tell she didn’t like it.

But she didn’t try to stop him either, which he understood, somehow, cost her something to allow.

Xuan Zhen was quiet through all of this, staring toward the ruins with the same expression he’d worn most of the night.

When he finally spoke, it wasn’t really to anybody in particular.

“We look,” he said.

“From a distance.

If anything so much as breathes wrong, we run, and I mean actually run, not the kind of running where somebody stops to grab a sword they dropped.” His eyes flicked to Chen Hao.

“That was a specific comment.” “I figured.” They left the packs behind and went in light, which felt worse somehow, like admitting they expected to need to move fast.

The ruins up close were worse than they’d looked from the treeline.

Not bigger, exactly, though they were that too — just wrong in a way that was hard to point at directly.

Stone laid in patterns that didn’t repeat the way patterns should.

Doorways that led into rooms with no visible far wall.

Once, Tianyun looked at a low archway for too long and felt something behind his eyes twist, gently, like a key turning in a lock he didn’t know was there, and he had to look away and blink hard before it settled.

“Don’t stare at things too long,” Xuan Zhen murmured, without looking back.

“The vale likes it when you stare.

Gives it something to work with.” “That’s not helpful information to receive after I’ve already been staring at things.” “Better late than never.” They kept low, moving between the broken stone in a rough line, Xuan Zhen leading, Chen Hao at the rear with his sword out.

Nobody talked much.

The quiet out here had a texture to it Tianyun didn’t like — not empty quiet, but quiet like something was listening and deciding whether to bother.

The spire came into view properly about halfway across the basin, close enough now that Tianyun could see it wasn’t smooth after all, not really — up close, its black surface was covered in the same crawling, shifting characters he remembered from the old shrine back home, except here they moved faster, more urgently, like something trying to finish a sentence before it ran out of room.

At its base, a wide stone platform had been cleared of moss and debris, swept clean in a way nothing else in the vale was.

Crimson-robed figures moved around it — six, maybe seven, Tianyun lost count fast — arranged in a loose circle around something on the ground he couldn’t quite make out from this distance.

“Get down,” Xuan Zhen said, and they did, flattening behind a half-collapsed wall.

Lin Yueqing’s hand found Tianyun’s arm, gripping hard.

“What are they doing,” she whispered.

He risked a look over the wall.

The thing on the ground resolved slowly into a person — a man, tied at the wrists, chest rising and falling too fast, too shallow.

One of the cultists knelt beside him, hand pressed flat to his sternum, and even from here Tianyun could feel it, faintly, the same cold pull he remembered from the caravan and the tournament both, except slower this time.

Deliberate.

Like they weren’t trying to kill him quickly.

Like they were trying to take exactly what they needed and nothing more, carefully, the way you’d drain a cup without spilling it.

“They’re harvesting him,” Tianyun said, and hated how flat his own voice sounded saying it.

“Slowly.

On purpose.” “We have to do something,” Feng Li said, already half-rising.

Xuan Zhen’s hand caught his shoulder and held him down, hard.

“We have seven of them we can see,” he said, low and fast.

“We have no idea how many we can’t see.

And whatever’s in that spire is watching everything happening on that platform, I’d bet my last drop of wine on it.

If we go in now, badly outnumbered, in a place that already tried to kill us once last night — we don’t save him.

We just become the next thing on that platform.” “So we do nothing.” “We go back.

We tell Elder Bao exactly what we saw.

We come back with people who can actually win this fight.” Xuan Zhen’s voice had gone hard in a way Tianyun hadn’t heard from him before, and underneath the hardness, something that sounded almost like grief already settling in early, before it was needed.

“I’m sorry.

I know that’s not the answer anyone wants.” Nobody said anything.

The man on the platform made a sound, thin and cracked, that might have been a word once.

Tianyun looked at Lin Yueqing.

She wasn’t looking at him.

She was looking at the platform, jaw tight, eyes wet, hands curled into fists in her lap like she was holding herself in place by force.

“I hate this,” she said, quiet, to nobody.

“Me too,” Tianyun said.

That was all either of them said about it.

There wasn’t really more to say that would’ve helped anything.

They pulled back the way they’d come, slow and careful, and it was maybe fifty paces from the platform that one of the cultists straightened up all at once, head turning toward the ruined wall they’d been hiding behind, like a dog catching a scent on the wind.

Nobody moved.

Nobody breathed, or tried very hard not to.

The cultist stood there a long moment, wrapped face angled toward them, and Tianyun’s whole body went tight and cold, waiting for the shout, the alarm, whatever came next.

Then it turned back to the platform, apparently satisfied by nothing, and the moment passed.

They didn’t talk again until they were well clear of the ruins, back at the treeline, packs retrieved, the vale’s wrongness fading slightly the farther they got from it, though never entirely gone.

“We’re coming back,” Chen Hao said, once they’d put real distance behind them.

Not a question.

“With more people.

Soon.” “As soon as Elder Bao can manage it,” Xuan Zhen said.

“I’ll make sure of that much myself.” Feng Li hadn’t said much since the platform.

He walked a little apart from the rest of them, hands jammed in his pockets, and when Tianyun caught up to walk beside him, he didn’t look over right away.

“I wanted to go in there,” Feng Li said eventually.

“I know it was stupid.

I know we would’ve died.

I still wanted to.” “I know.” “Doesn’t feel like it matters, wanting to, if you don’t do it.” “I don’t know,” Tianyun said, honestly.

“I think it matters a little.

I don’t know how much.” Feng Li didn’t answer that.

Just nodded, once, like he was filing the thought away somewhere to think about later, and they walked the rest of that stretch of trail in silence, the man’s cracked, half-formed word still sitting somewhere behind all of their thoughts, unanswered, and likely to stay that way for a while yet.

To be continue….

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