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The Ancestor Returns as an Outer Disciple

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Chapter 23: Episode 23 The Liu Family's Star Disciple

The Ancestor Returns as an Outer Disciple

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By the next dawn, the abandoned ground behind the eastern dormitory had acquired the habits of a real training court.

Five disciples arrived before the first bell.

Mats lay in two staggered rows, the well bucket stood beside the disciple whose pill-heated meridians still required cooling, and a strip of pale sunlight had been reserved for the narrow-shouldered girl whose fingers turned blue whenever she forced her circulation.Full novel: The Ancestor Returns as an Outer Disciple — read the rest free on N​o⁠v​e⁠l​C⁠o​d⁠e​x⁠.​o⁠r​g⁠

No one had appointed positions.

Qinglan had simply moved each person once, then again, until the arrangement stopped offending her.

Su Yuer called it thoughtful instruction.

Qinglan called it preventing avoidable corpses.

Neither explanation changed the fact that she stood before them with a willow switch in one hand, listening to five uneven breathing rhythms as if they were an orchestra determined to insult its conductor.

“Luo Cheng, loosen your right shoulder.” The broad young man obeyed so quickly that the other shoulder rose instead.

Qinglan closed her eyes.

“I asked you to correct one mistake, not move it somewhere less convenient.” “Senior Teacher Mei, my shoulders seem to share a loyal bond.” “Then teach them that loyalty does not require dying together.” Su Yuer made a choking sound behind her sleeve.

She had been assigned silent circulation after announcing, within Qinglan’s hearing, that the group needed an official name.

Her silence had lasted eleven breaths.

“Perhaps his shoulders need separate teachers,” she suggested.

Qinglan tapped the willow switch against her palm.

“Perhaps your second meridian needs another fifty cycles before breakfast.” Su Yuer’s eyes closed with saintly speed.

The clearing settled again.

Mist clung to the broken wall.

Beyond it, the sect’s tiled roofs emerged by degrees from the gray morning, row after row climbing toward halls whose lamps were fed with better oil and whose disciples trained with pills these five could never afford.

Qinglan watched Luo Cheng begin once more.

He drew breath into the lower abdomen, allowed the heel to root, and turned through the waist without locking his ribs.

His qi followed the motion in a rough but unbroken thread.

Yesterday, that thread would have snagged three times.

A week ago, it would not have reached his shoulder at all.

A small warmth stirred beneath Qinglan’s sternum.

She distrusted it immediately.

Her own verification before Han Zemin still waited.

One failed circulation could erase her place in the annual examination, and every hour spent correcting someone else was an hour stolen from Mei Lan’s fragile meridians.

A prudent cultivator would have dismissed the group until her own future was secure.

Master Ji Wuchen had once told her that prudence was an admirable cloak, especially when cowardice wished to enter a room unnoticed.

Qinglan had hated that lesson at twelve.

Three centuries had not improved it.

“Again,” she told Luo Cheng.

His face fell.

“That one was clean.” “It was cleaner.

If you mistake improvement for completion, you will spend your life polishing the first stair and calling it a mountain peak.” “I liked you better when you only insulted my shoulders.” “Your shoulders had fewer opinions.” Soft laughter passed through the group, and Luo Cheng began again.

This time the qi moved more smoothly.

Applause came from the footpath.

Each clap was slow, precise, and empty enough to turn the warmth in the clearing cold.

“What a touching spectacle,” a young man said.

“The sect’s castoffs have founded a court of their own.” Four disciples followed him down the path.

Their boots were clean despite the mud, their pale training robes newly pressed, and the silver clasps at their belts cost more than an outer disciple’s monthly allowance.

The one in front wore a white robe edged with fine silver thread.

A jade token bearing the Liu clan mark hung openly at his waist, though everyone in the sect already knew who he was.

Liu Renshu, nephew of Elder Liu Cang.

Four meridians opened before nineteen.

The favorite to place first among the outer disciples in the annual examination.

He carried those facts the way lesser men carried swords: polished, displayed, and always close at hand.

Su Yuer rose.

Her usual irreverence vanished behind a careful expression.

Luo Cheng shifted in front of the three newer disciples without appearing to notice that he had done so.

Qinglan noticed.

She also noticed the trace of pill fragrance beneath Liu Renshu’s perfume, the stiffness at his left wrist, and the faint delay before qi settled after each step.

Four open meridians, yes.

At least one had been widened faster than his body preferred.

Useful knowledge, though she had not yet decided whether he deserved the courtesy of being warned.

Liu’s gaze traveled over the mats, the chipped bucket, and the patched sleeves.

“Rumor said Mei Lan had gathered a pack of failures behind the dormitory.

I assumed even gossip would show more restraint.” Qinglan kept her eyes on Luo Cheng.

“If you came before dawn to measure rumor against reality, Young Master Liu, your days must contain a great deal of unused space.” One of his followers lowered his head too late to hide a smile.

Liu Renshu’s eyes sharpened.

“You know my name, yet you speak without respect.” “Your name arrived several steps before you.

It has been making noise ever since.” Su Yuer bit the inside of her cheek.

The disciple with cold channels stared determinedly at the ground, but her shoulders trembled.

“A crippled disciple who needed the Discipline Hall to clear her of pill abuse should be more careful,” Liu Renshu said.

“Your name was removed from the examination roster for good reason.” The words slipped past Qinglan without finding flesh.

She had been called arrogant by kings, unfilial by clans, and unreasonable by Gu Yanhe whenever he had exhausted every weaker argument.

A pampered boy repeating rumors ranked poorly among the insults of her life.

“Han Zemin gave me a path back onto the roster,” she said.

“If that troubles you, I suggest filing a complaint with someone patient enough to read it.” “You believe three days can repair ruined meridians?” “No, but I believe three days are enough to expose how little the person judging them understands.” His followers went still.

Even Su Yuer looked impressed, which Qinglan took as a warning that she had perhaps enjoyed the answer too much.

Liu Renshu stepped into the clearing.

“You teach altered breathing counts, correct postures you barely comprehend, and let these people call it the ancestor’s wisdom.

Do you imagine a few tricks can turn refuse into disciples?” Qinglan’s fingers tightened around the willow switch.

His contempt for her still meant nothing.

The word refuse did.

“They entered through the same gates you did,” she replied.

“They wear the same sect emblem.

If you cannot recognize fellow disciples without checking the quality of their shoes, Elder Liu Cang has neglected an important part of your education.” Color rose along Liu Renshu’s neck.

“Do not bring my uncle into this.” “You brought him with you on that token.

I assumed he was part of the introduction.” This time the laugh came from Su Yuer.

It escaped in one bright note before she disguised it as a cough.

Liu Renshu turned toward her.

“You must be Su Yuer.

Two years without opening a second meridian, then one week of this girl’s counterfeit teaching and suddenly you improve.

Did she give you a forbidden pill, or are the records being rewritten for all of you?” Su Yuer’s face whitened.

Her hand drifted to the place beneath her ribs where pain had lived so long that relief still felt borrowed.

Qinglan’s voice cooled.

“Ask me whatever you came to ask.

Leave them out of it.” “Why should I?

They chose to gather behind you.” Liu looked at Luo Cheng.

“And this one has failed the foundational body form so many times that Instructor Deng stopped recording his scores.” Luo Cheng lowered his gaze.

The movement was small, but Qinglan saw the old shame return to his posture.

His shoulders rose.

His breath shortened.

In a few careless sentences, Liu Renshu had begun rebuilding the cage Qinglan had spent nights teaching him to open.

“Look at me,” Qinglan said.

Luo Cheng did.

“Your last circulation was clean.

His opinion has not entered your meridians, so stop carrying it in your chest.” The young man’s breath shook once.

Then his shoulders came down.

Liu gave a derisive laugh.

“A clean circulation from a man with less grace than an ox.

Shall we carve a stele?” “An ox is useful,” Qinglan said.

“It pulls weight, works without applause, and rarely boasts about its relatives.” The laughter that followed was harder to hide.

Liu Renshu’s expression thinned until every trace of cultivated charm disappeared.

“You speak boldly because you think the annual examination will protect you.” He moved closer to Luo Cheng.

“When your little group faces real disciples, each of you will remember your proper place.” “Their proper place is wherever their ability takes them.” “Ability has already judged him.” Liu Renshu’s foot moved.

It was not a cultivation technique.

He used no qi and formed no seal.

The kick was ordinary, almost casual, which made its contempt worse.

Luo Cheng was still half-seated from his exercise when the heel struck his shoulder and sent him sideways into the mud.

The willow switch fell from Qinglan’s hand.

The clearing narrowed to the sound of Luo Cheng’s breath leaving him.

Three centuries vanished.

For one searing instant, Qinglan saw another courtyard, another disciple kneeling while an elder called pain a lesson.

She remembered blood on white stone and the terrible ease with which powerful people renamed cruelty when the victim lacked a voice.

Then she was standing between Liu Renshu and Luo Cheng.

She had crossed several paces before the willow switch touched the ground.

Mei Lan’s body should not have moved that quickly.

A thread of qi burned through her newly healed channels in protest, but she gave it no attention.

Liu took half a step back.

Qinglan saw the retreat, and so did he.

“You may insult me until your tongue improves through exercise,” she said.

Her voice was quiet enough that everyone leaned closer.

“You may doubt my meridians, my name, and every method I teach.

If you touch one of my disciples again, I will make you regret that the Liu name taught you to expect mercy from people beneath you.” For a heartbeat, no one spoke.

The words my disciples remained in the mist between them.

Su Yuer’s eyes widened.

Luo Cheng, still in the mud, looked as though the kick had hurt less than those two words.

Qinglan realized what she had said.

She decided there were worse mistakes to make before breakfast.

Liu Renshu recovered behind a sneer.

“Your disciples?

You have not even secured your own place in the examination.

I have opened four meridians.

I train under methods approved by the inner court, and Elder Liu personally provides my pills.

What will you oppose me with, Mei Lan?

A breathing count and five broken tools?” Qinglan crouched long enough to examine Luo Cheng’s shoulder.

The bruise would darken, but the bone remained sound.

He tried to rise without help.

She held out a hand anyway.

When Luo Cheng stood, his weight settled evenly through heel, waist, and shoulder.

The stance she had corrected all morning remained intact.

That quiet success answered something inside her.

Qinglan faced Liu Renshu.

“The examination is only weeks away.

Let the ranking settle which of us understands cultivation.” His smile returned.

“You want to challenge me?” “I want you to keep speaking exactly as you do now.

Defeat will improve with comparison.” Anger flashed through his eyes.

“Name your wager.” “When I place above you, you will apologize to Luo Cheng and every disciple you called refuse, before the entire outer court.” “And when you lose?” “You may ask the same of me.” Liu Renshu glanced at her narrow wrists, her faded robe, and the body everyone believed had nearly destroyed itself with stolen pills.

Confidence softened his mouth.

“Then use whatever secret art you stole.

Swallow every cheap pill your followers can buy.

It will make your humiliation more complete.” Qinglan smiled at last.

It was the smile she had once worn before stepping onto a tournament platform at sixteen, when Ji Wuchen had told her that an opponent with too much confidence was merely a lesson that had volunteered to teach itself.

“I will use no high-level technique,” she said.

“I will take no enhancement pill.

With only this body’s strength and the foundations your instructors dismissed, I will defeat the Liu family’s star disciple before the whole sect.”

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