Nathan Free, Natalie Bound

(First volume completed! Updates daily or better!) Content warnings before chapters when appropriate. 16 days ago I started reading this 2 days ago, and just bloody it. I must say, I love how you're running this story. The plot is involved without being overwhelming, and the stakes are high. Fantastic job, friend. 16 days ago I keep being amazed at comments like this. This is a huge story, how did you read it so fast?! And yet I feel encouraged to write even faster than I do because people like you are waiting for updates now! Thanks for the kind words, they're very helpful. I am glad to know the pacing and plotting are working because those have often been my weaknesses. And thank you again. 11 hours ago I've been reading for 3-ish days too. It's just so bingeworthy, idk if anyone would reliably be able to explain exactly though 8 hours ago Please let me know if you figure that out because I really need to put it in the blurb. 6 hours ago Well, I dunno about anyone else, but for my part it's because of a few things. First, the story is well written from a technical standpoint. Good sentence structure, grammar, verb usage, etc. Makes it very easy to just roll along. Second, Natalie is incredibly likeable as a character. Her voice is engaging and entertaining. Third, the plot makes sense. At no point did I feel like anything was an ass-pull, or some kind of WOG deus ex machine. Obviously, there is some suspension of disbelief, but that's a good thing in a story! Plus, you have a good combination of wins and losses for Natalie. She wins enough that it's not a grinding slog through depression and grim-derp, and she loses enough that it makes her story entertaining. Plus, you write good intrigue. Edit: holy wall o' words, Batman. Try making a blurb out of that, lol.