The Dungeon Without a System

The unnamed main character wakes up as a Dungeon Core. Instead of being deep within the earth or in... Read more The unnamed main character wakes up as a Dungeon Core. Instead of being deep within the earth or in a cave, this newly-minted Dungeon Core finds himself drifting to the beach of an uncharted and uninhabited island.Watch as he explores the uses of mana, defends himself from people trying to kill him and confuses the hell out of all the humans who attempt to understand just why he's different from other dungeons.DISCLAIMER: I have only posted my novel to Sufficient Velocity and RoyalRoad. If you see it on any other site; THAT IS NOT ME. This story is free and until I decide to publish it will remain that way. Collapse Dungeons, Genetic Modifications, Fantasy World, Magic, Non-human Protagonist, Character Growth, Weak to Strong, Adventurers, Monsters, Evolution, Proactive Protagonist, Multiple POV, Clever Protagonist, Mercenaries, Misunderstandings, Dungeon Master #panic# no update Fixed. It's novel but loses that spark of awe rather quickly and becomes monotonous but still enjoyable.Truth be told the side characters became the highlight of this for me as opposed to the boredom I felt in the creation of the Dungeon..... I suppose the main reason for my boredom with the Dungeon was that it became grind without reward and less about leaving people in awe and more about torturing and turning them away without any of the former. Congratulate this guy, I really followed his link to read I am reading this novel on royal road. It is actually better than I expected. Great dungeon core novel. Solid premise with a free form development. Interesting creatures populate the dungeon of our MC and has plenty of varying areas or biomes. Some people have whined about the human component but it mostly just relates to the actual dungeon and far less politics than other novels in the same genre.Overall a solid read with too few chapters at the moment. 4.3/5 $4a I am convinced you actually haven't even read the book bc everything you said is wrong $4b Honestly, I get what you're saying, I didn't understand why he just let them settle on his island, and I understand that he gets mana and knowledge from the people he kills but it's not like not having enough mana would ever be an issue for him because he just absorbed it from the air. He didn't really need the knowledge either because it's been shown that he can figure out how to use elemental magic on his own just fine. I guess I could understand mingling with humans if he really got anything out of it but he kinda just gave them 5 questions a week and got nothing in return. letting that female prisoner roam around his dungeon also didn't make a lot of sense since he killed the other 4 prisoners anyway but just let her live for no reason. Cara a parte do prisioneiro eu concordo plenamente com vocês, mas a parte das perguntas eu até faria isso se fosse uma masmorra, pois para cada 3 perguntas (eu acho) ele ganha um casal de monstros significando mais monstros para serem criados, claro ele não tem que dar tudo de mão beijada mas sim fazer um "desvio" assim ele gasta a pergunta e ganha uma "vantagem".Claro isso é no meu ver, pois querendo ou não ele estar em uma ilha já é uma tremenda desvantagem, e se ele criar monstros que se parecem como humanos e que possam se disfarçar na sua sociedade para trazer os animais o negocia de perguntas se torna obsoleto, mas acho que vai demorar para isso acontecer The prisoner part I totally with you, but the questions part I would do if it was a dungeon, because for every 3 questions (I think) he gets a couple of monsters meaning more monsters for servants, of course he doesn't have to give his all. kissed hand but rather make a "detour" so he spends the question and gains an "advantage". Of course he wants to see it, because whether or not he wants to know that this is a question of animals, a society, and if he is monstrous who appears to be human and seems to be already a person who can disguise himself in his own, to bring them up or trade obsolete, but I think it will take time to happen He was keeping the girl for experiments, as for roaming around the dungeon he wants to use her as an advocate for the dungeon. Read devourer Also emotionless mc will eventually develop to have emotions being the main arc of the book. Like kidnapped dragons Dude that's probably describing most dungeon core novels Popcorn demon is right. The stupid deal he made where he answers questions for animals is stupid. He doesn't get to pick the animals, the lady gives him harmless animals. She gave him a rabbit to populate the dungeon with. I'm sure the MC can turn the rabbit into something dangerous but why bother. He could have asked for carnivorous apex predators and elevate those into supreme predators.But you know what. The dungeon, which is the MC, answers every question honestly or it doesn't lie. So the MC is on the bad end of a deal but he is cool with it. The dungeon is a nice dungeon. Not the efficient dungeon killer I expected.In a nut shell. The dungeon became the exp slave of the humans. Edi wag mo basahin pest* ka. Top tier shit, (those rating it at 1 star are brain dead ) I disagree. I agree to disagree 😆 So are you agreeing with me? You've actually never heard the proverb before? I know the proverb or whatever. It isn't a proverb by the way. Go aatch men in black 3 ull atleast find it there. ( first rime i heard it was over there) Just a few chapters in and I got annoyed by what seemed like a simple, lazy story writer.I'm not going to say that the novel is bad since I know many people like this kind of stuff, but it most certainly isn't my cup of tea.When reading this kind of stuff it just makes me think of a kind of naive person without much life experiences, education or expertise in anything but weeb or gamer pursuits, and a very narrow exposure to literature as a whole.There's nothing wrong with a person being any of that. I just rarely ever find them or their works terribly compelling. *Coughs. Incognito-san, this is not a review. You just wrote smack about the author. You didn't point out the faults of the book. 'Simple, lazy writing' is a concise manner of describing a lot of traits/mistakes common to authors without much education or life experiences, which many readers are familiar with.Going into elaborate detail is pointless since those who don't know typically wouldn't care.And I mentioned that I find nothing wrong with being less educated and experienced. We all start there, and we don't all get the opportunity to significantly improve those traits.But that doesn't mean I'm going to coddle people's egos. Our current culture treats lower IQs like many treat obesity, like it doesn't exist and it's wrong to point out even when it's important/relevant, or as a weapon to attack with. 1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still readingthis8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! I mistakenly no.1 as I got a big dick lol 😂 i wasnt qualified for step 2. i read enough translated novels to read that both right and wrong at the same time.But im curious more 9n how is this post related to the novel above? Why did people dislike this? They don't have dig bick thay's why... Because it’s annoying and I see it in every comment section This is a treasure. Lol. since I quite like it I’ll ”borrow” it from u like Emperor Roselle I've read a bunch of dungeon novel and this novel is one of the best out there but there's really nothing new to this novel, no new plots or world building, basically same story with other dungeon novel but with much better approach This is slice of life isnt it? 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