The rise of a Frozen Star

After a lonely life marked by the indifference of his classmates and an unexpected tragedy, Edward Celium dies saving the only creature that ever offered him unconditional love: his dog, Chloé. But death is not the end. Upon opening his eyes, Edward discovers that he has been reborn… as a girl in a fantasy world full of magic, swords, and ancient secrets. Now she is Liselotte, the daughter of a loving couple in an unfamiliar land. [This is my first time writing a story, and I don't speak English either, so if there are any grammatical mistakes, I hope for your help in correcting them.]